-This is my brother's. I say it's a 6.5 maybe a 7 but he says I'm just jealous and should ask my "peeps on that answer site thing." So here I am asking you.
I was being stalked. But this wasn't your ordinary stalker, if what I've heard is true. She was like any other teenage girl in mid-summer, wearing denim short-shorts, a tank top, and flip-flops. You may be thinking that it was a coincidence, maybe that she was going where I was going, but let me ask you: what destination requires you to take four rights in a row, go around one of those spinny doors six times and go back and forth between the same two subway stops four times. She was totally stalking me...i like it it
i think its a mysterious beginning
why not add a question as the last sentence, so it pulls in the reader more
I don't like it...it's boring and just a truckload of random babbling about being stalked by some girl. Make it more interesting....And I couldn't care less what she was wearing.
That is actually pretty good. It makes the reader want to know why that girl is "stalking him".
don't end the begginning with she was totally stalking me... end it more like "but why....?"
Meh. Not that good.
It could be better, but I like the idea
It's okay but your profile picture is AMAZING!!!
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2011年8月27日星期六
Harry Potter characters versus Twilight characters?
-If some of the characters from Harry Potter and Twilight fought, who do you think would win in the following situations? Oh, and all of them battle to the death.
Harry against Edward
Dumbledore against Carlisle
Voldemort and his army against Victoria and her army
If in the above situations, all of the characters had their wands and powers, who would win? I personally think Harry, Dumbledore, and Voldemort would win. Harry just has to use Protego, then Petrificus Totalus, and then Incendio. Dumbledore can do that storm of fire he did in Half-Blood Prince, and Voldemort can do the huge flaming snake, and his Death Eaters could cast Incendio or other fire related spells. Voldemort also has Horcruxes, so he can't die.Just to let you know, Voldemort would OBLITERATE any of Twilight's villains. The magic vs. vampires thing just doesn't work. Not only
that, but Voldemort has Dementors, werewolves, giants, etc. in his legions. Voldemort and Dumbledore are the most powerful wizards in history. Oh, and did I mention The Elder Wand, Horcruxes, and all the other powerful things these wizards can do? As Mr. Olivander said in DH Part 2: "You know, you really don't stand a chance.."
And Carlisle vs. Dumbledore? That's like pitting Bella Swan against Gandalf.
Harry would beat Edward so fast.Harry would win, because he can do spells and magic, while Edward is just a vampire who sparkles and has superhuman strength/speed.
Dumbledore would totally win. He's the most powerful wizard in the HP Realm. Carlisle is, again, just a vampire who sparkles and has superhuman strength/speed.
Voldemort would PWN Victoria and her army. He's Voldemort. Him and his stupid Horcruxes are unkillable.
Edward and Carlisle, by virtue of being Gary-Stus and thus undefeatable.
For the last battle, definitely Voldemort, seeing as Victoria and the Volturi would probably decide not to fight at the last second.
I totally agree with you (no matter how much I hate Harry and Dumbledore) Because they had their wands they could EASILY win ;)
;)
I agree with you. And I also think Neville is the best.
Harry against Edward
Dumbledore against Carlisle
Voldemort and his army against Victoria and her army
If in the above situations, all of the characters had their wands and powers, who would win? I personally think Harry, Dumbledore, and Voldemort would win. Harry just has to use Protego, then Petrificus Totalus, and then Incendio. Dumbledore can do that storm of fire he did in Half-Blood Prince, and Voldemort can do the huge flaming snake, and his Death Eaters could cast Incendio or other fire related spells. Voldemort also has Horcruxes, so he can't die.Just to let you know, Voldemort would OBLITERATE any of Twilight's villains. The magic vs. vampires thing just doesn't work. Not only
that, but Voldemort has Dementors, werewolves, giants, etc. in his legions. Voldemort and Dumbledore are the most powerful wizards in history. Oh, and did I mention The Elder Wand, Horcruxes, and all the other powerful things these wizards can do? As Mr. Olivander said in DH Part 2: "You know, you really don't stand a chance.."
And Carlisle vs. Dumbledore? That's like pitting Bella Swan against Gandalf.
Harry would beat Edward so fast.Harry would win, because he can do spells and magic, while Edward is just a vampire who sparkles and has superhuman strength/speed.
Dumbledore would totally win. He's the most powerful wizard in the HP Realm. Carlisle is, again, just a vampire who sparkles and has superhuman strength/speed.
Voldemort would PWN Victoria and her army. He's Voldemort. Him and his stupid Horcruxes are unkillable.
Edward and Carlisle, by virtue of being Gary-Stus and thus undefeatable.
For the last battle, definitely Voldemort, seeing as Victoria and the Volturi would probably decide not to fight at the last second.
I totally agree with you (no matter how much I hate Harry and Dumbledore) Because they had their wands they could EASILY win ;)
;)
I agree with you. And I also think Neville is the best.
Any ideas for a title of my story that's set in Morocco?
-It's set in Asilah, Morocco and it's about a bunch of people coming here to look for themselves, or love or inspiration. So it's kind of like Eat. Pray. Love. Any ideas on what I should title it?Maybe Find Yourself in Morocco, or The Far Away Mystery? I don't know... I'm not a poet :) Try asking this question on trustthecrowd.com. Hope it helped.
HOW ABOUT-
-FIND
-SEARCH
--INNER
-HEART AND SOUL
-LIFE ON THE OTHER SIDE
-THE OTHER HALF
-A NEW LAND
HOW ABOUT-
-FIND
-SEARCH
--INNER
-HEART AND SOUL
-LIFE ON THE OTHER SIDE
-THE OTHER HALF
-A NEW LAND
2011年8月4日星期四
Warriors Clan- Is it good?
-Is my Warriors Clan good?
StormClan
Leader- Lightstar(orange tom)
Deputy- Icestorm(white she-cat) apprentice Fuzzypaw(white she-cat with ginger splotches)
Med Cat- Foxtail(brown tom) apprentice Rainpaw(gray she-cat)
Warriors-
Nighteyes(black tom)
Scarshadow(brown tabby tom) apprentice Talonpaw(Dark brown tabby tom)
Leapordpelt(tortoiseshell she-cat) apprentice Mosspaw(gray tom)
Bushtail(white she-cat)
Falconfur(brown tabby tom) aprprentice Hawkpaw(tortoiseshell she-cat)
Grasspelt(gray tom)
Queens-
Bramblebelly(ginger she-cat) Nighteyes' kits- Brightkit(gingertom and Bloomkit(ginger she-cat)
Spottedpelt(tortoiseshell she-cat) carrying Grasspelt's kitsYes. It has a good amount of Warriors, Queens, and Apprentices.
StormClan
Leader- Lightstar(orange tom)
Deputy- Icestorm(white she-cat) apprentice Fuzzypaw(white she-cat with ginger splotches)
Med Cat- Foxtail(brown tom) apprentice Rainpaw(gray she-cat)
Warriors-
Nighteyes(black tom)
Scarshadow(brown tabby tom) apprentice Talonpaw(Dark brown tabby tom)
Leapordpelt(tortoiseshell she-cat) apprentice Mosspaw(gray tom)
Bushtail(white she-cat)
Falconfur(brown tabby tom) aprprentice Hawkpaw(tortoiseshell she-cat)
Grasspelt(gray tom)
Queens-
Bramblebelly(ginger she-cat) Nighteyes' kits- Brightkit(gingertom and Bloomkit(ginger she-cat)
Spottedpelt(tortoiseshell she-cat) carrying Grasspelt's kitsYes. It has a good amount of Warriors, Queens, and Apprentices.
Where to find a book with DUI arrest stories and the process it took until trial?
-I know someone who was arrested for a dui. I am wondering if there are any books written that have similar experiences and the outcomes. Thank you.
Questions about a kindle?
-My dad wants to buy my mom a kindle and he asked if I could do some research. I was wonder ing the average cost of the kindle and the books?The Kindle wi-fi is 139.99. It only has wi-fi, so you're limited to your house and places with free wi-fi.
The Kindle wi-fi w/ special offers (ads on the bottom of the screen, but only on the main screen, not while your reading) is 99.99
The Kindle 3G + wi-fi is 189.99. You can download books ANYWHERE and I mean ANYWHERE.
The Kindle 3G + wi-fi w/ special offers (same as above) is 139.99
New books are about $10, but there are tons of books that are only a couple of dollars, and alot that are free. You can also buy magazines, and there is a web browser.
The main idea of eBooks is to make it cheaper. About 50% book price is paper cost and print expenses. Here are figures from Amazon - over 550,000 of these books are $9.99 or less, including 73 New York Times庐 Best Sellers.
OMG XD sorry I can't answer your question but I'm getting a Kindle too! very soon! I can't WAIT! are you also going to get a cover for it?
About $114.00- and up. Go to amazon. Com. Or go to YouTube and type in Kindle review... hope I helped =).
The Kindle wi-fi w/ special offers (ads on the bottom of the screen, but only on the main screen, not while your reading) is 99.99
The Kindle 3G + wi-fi is 189.99. You can download books ANYWHERE and I mean ANYWHERE.
The Kindle 3G + wi-fi w/ special offers (same as above) is 139.99
New books are about $10, but there are tons of books that are only a couple of dollars, and alot that are free. You can also buy magazines, and there is a web browser.
The main idea of eBooks is to make it cheaper. About 50% book price is paper cost and print expenses. Here are figures from Amazon - over 550,000 of these books are $9.99 or less, including 73 New York Times庐 Best Sellers.
OMG XD sorry I can't answer your question but I'm getting a Kindle too! very soon! I can't WAIT! are you also going to get a cover for it?
About $114.00- and up. Go to amazon. Com. Or go to YouTube and type in Kindle review... hope I helped =).
I need Character name help?
-I'm writing a medieval fiction series but I'm stuck on naming the characters I would appreciate some help
There are a lot of characters so the more names the better. I'm looking for names that you wouldn't hear anymore (so no William or Robert etc.) and elfish names but not too elfish if you know what I mean. Also I need second names
Thanks!There are a lot of names still around today that were very popular back then, think Elizabeth and Arthur.
Check this out http://medieval.stormthecastle.com/medie鈥?/a>
and http://www.candlekeep.com/library/articl鈥?/a>
Don't be opposed to some names still around today because it makes it legitimate and people will connect it to their lives which helps them escape into the fantasy even more.
I hope this helps.
Kaeon, Eniiko, Shekoni, Opeaka, Kali, Alreah,
Or just take a normal name and spell it funny;
Rebekha, Arone, Khloe, Stefhan
Last names, try adding to words together - clearlake, greybeard, highsky, the might be a bit too fantasy-ish,
Welsh words joined together sound pretty- gwynant, fflamgoch.. So yeah :)
Hi, I've tried, made up my own so I hope they're ok for you.
Calsey Trang, Rorey Pintish, Jungo Marn, Verity Swathe, Arora Innis,
Quantim soothe, Evadne Umbs.
Not easy is it when you try to get names out of the air.
Seraphine Vore
Callory Shae
Blaise Thorne
Shyla Cavern
Lyrae Magique
Yvaine Reichs
Aila Havers
Katerina Perigne
Sierra Hope
Evelena Happ毛
these are literally off the top of my head, so sorry if they're a bit strange. hope they helped anyway.
I went to college with a guy called Jack Savage always thought it sounded like the name of a comic book superhero.
Felicity Cherrymaiden my alter ego feisty buxom and very cunning...
Mr. Gavondoralondarustickontoniuelli!
What about Lorcan Trist?
There are a lot of characters so the more names the better. I'm looking for names that you wouldn't hear anymore (so no William or Robert etc.) and elfish names but not too elfish if you know what I mean. Also I need second names
Thanks!There are a lot of names still around today that were very popular back then, think Elizabeth and Arthur.
Check this out http://medieval.stormthecastle.com/medie鈥?/a>
and http://www.candlekeep.com/library/articl鈥?/a>
Don't be opposed to some names still around today because it makes it legitimate and people will connect it to their lives which helps them escape into the fantasy even more.
I hope this helps.
Kaeon, Eniiko, Shekoni, Opeaka, Kali, Alreah,
Or just take a normal name and spell it funny;
Rebekha, Arone, Khloe, Stefhan
Last names, try adding to words together - clearlake, greybeard, highsky, the might be a bit too fantasy-ish,
Welsh words joined together sound pretty- gwynant, fflamgoch.. So yeah :)
Hi, I've tried, made up my own so I hope they're ok for you.
Calsey Trang, Rorey Pintish, Jungo Marn, Verity Swathe, Arora Innis,
Quantim soothe, Evadne Umbs.
Not easy is it when you try to get names out of the air.
Seraphine Vore
Callory Shae
Blaise Thorne
Shyla Cavern
Lyrae Magique
Yvaine Reichs
Aila Havers
Katerina Perigne
Sierra Hope
Evelena Happ毛
these are literally off the top of my head, so sorry if they're a bit strange. hope they helped anyway.
I went to college with a guy called Jack Savage always thought it sounded like the name of a comic book superhero.
Felicity Cherrymaiden my alter ego feisty buxom and very cunning...
Mr. Gavondoralondarustickontoniuelli!
What about Lorcan Trist?
I need to ask a question about 1st and 3rd person writing?
-I'm writing a book where the story is seen from the perspective of Draco, but the prologue is in third person. is this all right? or does the prolougue have to be from draco's perspective too?You can write it however you want. You can switch prospectives throughout the book if that's what you want to do.
Um, if you just put whats around him. Not miles away in some different house then yeah I think its okay. He just needs to be in view of it.
!?!
Um, if you just put whats around him. Not miles away in some different house then yeah I think its okay. He just needs to be in view of it.
!?!
In Harry Potter the deathly hallows, which character/s are you saddest died? ?
-Mine is either Snape, or Fred :(
And do we know If lavender brown died?Definitely Snape. David Y. didn't drag out the deaths too far. I cried at Snape's death and Dobby's.Snape.
And as far as Lavender Brown, in the movie they present it as though she died...they show one of the Patil twins sitting with Trelawney as Trelawney pulls a sheet over her head.
As for the book, she falls from the balcony, hitting the ground but didn't die from this fall, b/c she is said to be 'feebly struggling' while Greyback is attacking her. Hermione gets Greyback off her, and Trelawney drops a crystal ball on him. It mentions Lavender 'stirring' but that's the last we hear of her. She is either part of the 50 un-named casualties or recovered.....I think she most likely died.
Well I wasn't personally sad that Fred died I was just sad for the weasleys. Tonks and Remus were sad but I suprisingly felt the saddest when snape died. I don't know if it was the way he died or because of all the loss he had experienced bu I cried from the pint where he got killed to when Harry finished watching his memories.
i was sad for all, but i CRIED for hedwig, dobby, & fred:
hedwig & dobby- were both innocent characters who pretty much lived to help harry & be his companion. hedwig was with him since the beginning & dobby was with him since ALMOST the beginning.
fred- where do i start?? first of all, HOW COULD SHE BREAK UP THE WEASLEY TWINS???????? second, fred always provided comic relief but could also be serious. & ...omg. i can only imagine how crestfallen george was (like fred was when he thought GEORGE had died) SOOO SAD!!!
It was probably Fred because he had always been one of my favorite characters. Although, it was sad when lots of the really good people died. I can't say if I was more sad when I read the book or when I watched the movie.
I think they were all heartbreaking to see die and they all made me cry Hedwig,Mad-Eye, Remus, Tonks, Snape, Fred and the brothers that adored Harry I can't just pick one because I loved them all they all made me cry.
Snape, Lupin and Fred! Three of my favourite characters :(
In the film Lavender Brown died, she was the one Fenrir Greyback was feasting on. But in the book she didn't.
Hedwig. It was just such a shock to me. (The movie did not do it justice.)
Lavender lived, per J.K. Rowling.
Definetly fred ),:
Hedwig obviously I was sooooo annoyed and Harry didn't seem to care!!!!
Same as you....They were actually my favourite characters and had been from the start so I was so sad when they both died :(
Snape, Dobby, Fred.
and Bellatrix. she was a BAMF.
Snape and Fred made me equally sad. But Remus and tonks also were very sad. If I had to pick I would say snape
Fred's death made me all teary eyed, I cried over Snape's death, Dobby and Remus's deaths were sad as well. It is difficult to decide.
Sirius
Dobby :(
I only f****ing cared about Fred:.(
Would I sound ridiculous if I said that Dobby's death absolutely made me break down and weep?
Dobby!! I cried when so much when I read that :'(, but Fred was sad too. I hated Remus and Nymphadora too :( sooooo sad!!!
Fred. D:
jk rowlings career
Oh man, it's hard to pick.
Probably Fred or Lupin and Tonks.
snape fred and most of all.. voldy :(
Fred, dobby and mad eye! i almost cried when fred died!
And do we know If lavender brown died?Definitely Snape. David Y. didn't drag out the deaths too far. I cried at Snape's death and Dobby's.Snape.
And as far as Lavender Brown, in the movie they present it as though she died...they show one of the Patil twins sitting with Trelawney as Trelawney pulls a sheet over her head.
As for the book, she falls from the balcony, hitting the ground but didn't die from this fall, b/c she is said to be 'feebly struggling' while Greyback is attacking her. Hermione gets Greyback off her, and Trelawney drops a crystal ball on him. It mentions Lavender 'stirring' but that's the last we hear of her. She is either part of the 50 un-named casualties or recovered.....I think she most likely died.
Well I wasn't personally sad that Fred died I was just sad for the weasleys. Tonks and Remus were sad but I suprisingly felt the saddest when snape died. I don't know if it was the way he died or because of all the loss he had experienced bu I cried from the pint where he got killed to when Harry finished watching his memories.
i was sad for all, but i CRIED for hedwig, dobby, & fred:
hedwig & dobby- were both innocent characters who pretty much lived to help harry & be his companion. hedwig was with him since the beginning & dobby was with him since ALMOST the beginning.
fred- where do i start?? first of all, HOW COULD SHE BREAK UP THE WEASLEY TWINS???????? second, fred always provided comic relief but could also be serious. & ...omg. i can only imagine how crestfallen george was (like fred was when he thought GEORGE had died) SOOO SAD!!!
It was probably Fred because he had always been one of my favorite characters. Although, it was sad when lots of the really good people died. I can't say if I was more sad when I read the book or when I watched the movie.
I think they were all heartbreaking to see die and they all made me cry Hedwig,Mad-Eye, Remus, Tonks, Snape, Fred and the brothers that adored Harry I can't just pick one because I loved them all they all made me cry.
Snape, Lupin and Fred! Three of my favourite characters :(
In the film Lavender Brown died, she was the one Fenrir Greyback was feasting on. But in the book she didn't.
Hedwig. It was just such a shock to me. (The movie did not do it justice.)
Lavender lived, per J.K. Rowling.
Definetly fred ),:
Hedwig obviously I was sooooo annoyed and Harry didn't seem to care!!!!
Same as you....They were actually my favourite characters and had been from the start so I was so sad when they both died :(
Snape, Dobby, Fred.
and Bellatrix. she was a BAMF.
Snape and Fred made me equally sad. But Remus and tonks also were very sad. If I had to pick I would say snape
Fred's death made me all teary eyed, I cried over Snape's death, Dobby and Remus's deaths were sad as well. It is difficult to decide.
Sirius
Dobby :(
I only f****ing cared about Fred:.(
Would I sound ridiculous if I said that Dobby's death absolutely made me break down and weep?
Dobby!! I cried when so much when I read that :'(, but Fred was sad too. I hated Remus and Nymphadora too :( sooooo sad!!!
Fred. D:
jk rowlings career
Oh man, it's hard to pick.
Probably Fred or Lupin and Tonks.
snape fred and most of all.. voldy :(
Fred, dobby and mad eye! i almost cried when fred died!
Has anybody read Vessel of Sadness by William Woodruff?
-I have read W.Woodruff's books about living in poverty in Blackburn in Britain and wondered about reading a Vessel of Sadness another book he wrote.no i didnt
Names for a Romeo and Juliet parody?
-Help? :)Parodies don't have to copy the style of the original work's title. It doesn't have to be "(boy) & (girl)".
Frankly, the title of ANY story, nonetheless a parody, needs to say a lot more than "obvious parody of (insert work here)". You simply don't have enough--you don't have anything for that matter--that anyone can use to give you a title.
NOT Gnomeo and Juliet, damn If shakespere was alive he would have killed himself after hearing that that movie was comming out, I swear!
Instead of Juliet you can make her name be Julie, Julia, or Jewel.
As for something that sounds like Romeo.... I'm drawing a blank. :)
Rolo & Jelly
Jomeo & Ruliet
PROMeo & FOOLiet
Romeut & Julio
Romeot & Julieto
Rome & Jule
Romie & Julie
Hope these help :P
zombeo and juliet?
the dudes a zombie?
Gnomeo & Juliet :)
Gnomio and Juliet is the latest.
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Frankly, the title of ANY story, nonetheless a parody, needs to say a lot more than "obvious parody of (insert work here)". You simply don't have enough--you don't have anything for that matter--that anyone can use to give you a title.
NOT Gnomeo and Juliet, damn If shakespere was alive he would have killed himself after hearing that that movie was comming out, I swear!
Instead of Juliet you can make her name be Julie, Julia, or Jewel.
As for something that sounds like Romeo.... I'm drawing a blank. :)
Rolo & Jelly
Jomeo & Ruliet
PROMeo & FOOLiet
Romeut & Julio
Romeot & Julieto
Rome & Jule
Romie & Julie
Hope these help :P
zombeo and juliet?
the dudes a zombie?
Gnomeo & Juliet :)
Gnomio and Juliet is the latest.
.
Anyone want to critique first few chapters of my novel?
-Hi, I have written a novel and am currently editing it so am looking for as many people as possible who I don't know to read some and tell me what they think - honest opinions and ideas on how to improve would help a lot, thanks :)
You will only have to read the intro and first three chapters as it is this that will hook any agents when I get to that part of the publishing process (of course if you want to read a bit more I'll happily oblige)Like Joe, I wouldn't mind reading it, and I do enjoying constructive critiquing. :)
Sounds fun! How about creating a blog w/ the chapters and sending us the link? Email us or something!
i wouldnt mind reading it, ive been looking for something to read recently.
I would like too :]
Like the first answerer you can go to Wattpad.com,make an account,and upload your story :]
Could you give a summary of it first?
You could post your story in WattPad.com where people can read and comment on it :) It might be helpful.
You will only have to read the intro and first three chapters as it is this that will hook any agents when I get to that part of the publishing process (of course if you want to read a bit more I'll happily oblige)Like Joe, I wouldn't mind reading it, and I do enjoying constructive critiquing. :)
Sounds fun! How about creating a blog w/ the chapters and sending us the link? Email us or something!
i wouldnt mind reading it, ive been looking for something to read recently.
I would like too :]
Like the first answerer you can go to Wattpad.com,make an account,and upload your story :]
Could you give a summary of it first?
You could post your story in WattPad.com where people can read and comment on it :) It might be helpful.
I have a story idea...?
-I have an idea for a story, but absolutely no clue of how to put it on to paper. Does anyone have any tips on beginning a novel? Or somewhere I could go to get tips? Thank youIdeas:
1) Brainstorm. Get a blank piece of paper and a pen and spend 30-45 minutes jotting down whatever comes to mind about your project, no matter how stupid it seems. Don't do it on the computer--that will make it too easy to delete. Brainstorming is all about just getting ideas out indiscriminately.
2) Write a synopsis of what you think should happen and when it should happen. Be flexible, though, because it probably will change when you start writing.
3) Modern novels are written in scenes. Once you have a very basic idea of where you're going, think about scenes that could show your story. In the synopsis, you'll write things like, "He gradually begins to realize that she doesn't love him." Well, it's up to you to show that by way of scenes. Maybe he notices she's not really paying attention to him the way she used to when, say, he tries to tell her something serious and realizes halfway through she's not listening. Or maybe he invites her to go somewhere that before would've really excited her but now she doesn't want to go..etc.
4) Profile your main characters. Google "character profile template" and fill out the chart and answer the questions for your main and supporting characters. Make sure each character is conflicted, quirky, and interesting. Sad characters are more interesting than happy ones, because we as readers like conflict. Don't be afraid to give the characters serious flaws. Readers are pretty jaded these days, so they're more sympathetic to a character with flaws than a "perfect" character. That's one of the main reasons Sherlock Holmes, though he's antisocial and a drug addict, is a much better character than blond-haired, blue-eyed Nancy Drew who's never impatient or frustrated, is good with kids, has a sweet Ken-like boyfriend, and always solves her cases.
When i first starting writing and needed help getting my ideas out, i used the SnowFlake Method, some people dislike it as they say it forces you to plan your story too much, and some people hate this. But i found it helpful but to be honest you find your own Method and you become more experienced.
I always plan a plot first, write that down, then focus on the plot. The plot can be boring and mundane but if you have strong and believable characters they can make a huge difference.
But try to avoid Harry Potter and Twilight ideas and teen romances they're over done already and there are fantastic other genres you can write under that are far more interesting and a little more complex and require an more mature mind.
Whatever you do good luck
Starting a story is the most difficult, I had the same experience. You could either fast forward and just write any scene (doesn't matter if it's the end or somewhere in the middle), then work your way back. Or you can just start writing. Don't look at the grammar and all that, just write. There will be plenty of time to revise and rephrase. hope this helps.
1) Brainstorm. Get a blank piece of paper and a pen and spend 30-45 minutes jotting down whatever comes to mind about your project, no matter how stupid it seems. Don't do it on the computer--that will make it too easy to delete. Brainstorming is all about just getting ideas out indiscriminately.
2) Write a synopsis of what you think should happen and when it should happen. Be flexible, though, because it probably will change when you start writing.
3) Modern novels are written in scenes. Once you have a very basic idea of where you're going, think about scenes that could show your story. In the synopsis, you'll write things like, "He gradually begins to realize that she doesn't love him." Well, it's up to you to show that by way of scenes. Maybe he notices she's not really paying attention to him the way she used to when, say, he tries to tell her something serious and realizes halfway through she's not listening. Or maybe he invites her to go somewhere that before would've really excited her but now she doesn't want to go..etc.
4) Profile your main characters. Google "character profile template" and fill out the chart and answer the questions for your main and supporting characters. Make sure each character is conflicted, quirky, and interesting. Sad characters are more interesting than happy ones, because we as readers like conflict. Don't be afraid to give the characters serious flaws. Readers are pretty jaded these days, so they're more sympathetic to a character with flaws than a "perfect" character. That's one of the main reasons Sherlock Holmes, though he's antisocial and a drug addict, is a much better character than blond-haired, blue-eyed Nancy Drew who's never impatient or frustrated, is good with kids, has a sweet Ken-like boyfriend, and always solves her cases.
When i first starting writing and needed help getting my ideas out, i used the SnowFlake Method, some people dislike it as they say it forces you to plan your story too much, and some people hate this. But i found it helpful but to be honest you find your own Method and you become more experienced.
I always plan a plot first, write that down, then focus on the plot. The plot can be boring and mundane but if you have strong and believable characters they can make a huge difference.
But try to avoid Harry Potter and Twilight ideas and teen romances they're over done already and there are fantastic other genres you can write under that are far more interesting and a little more complex and require an more mature mind.
Whatever you do good luck
Starting a story is the most difficult, I had the same experience. You could either fast forward and just write any scene (doesn't matter if it's the end or somewhere in the middle), then work your way back. Or you can just start writing. Don't look at the grammar and all that, just write. There will be plenty of time to revise and rephrase. hope this helps.
Looking for some books about yoga that focus on the spiritual. Any recommendations?
-My all-time favorite yoga book is "The Tenth Door" by Michele Hebert, so preferably something along those lines. Thanks!
http://www.rajayogis.netHello Laura Greene,
You might want to check out Light on Life: The Yoga Journey to Wholeness, Inner Peace, and Ultimate Freedom by B.K.S. Iyengar.
http://www.amazon.com/Light-Life-Journey鈥?/a>
http://www.rajayogis.netHello Laura Greene,
You might want to check out Light on Life: The Yoga Journey to Wholeness, Inner Peace, and Ultimate Freedom by B.K.S. Iyengar.
http://www.amazon.com/Light-Life-Journey鈥?/a>
Any good books for 13 year old?
-Hi, is there any good books out there that I can read?
Im a girl
I prefer adventures, fantasies, romances ect.
Ive read : meg cabot, jaqueline wilson, twilight saga ( who doesnt), Harry potters, Percy Jacksons.
Basically the famous ones lol
Thnx, very much appreciated!!!Matched (#1) and Crossed (#2) [<-COMING SOON, NOVEMBER 1, 2011] by Ally Condie
Beautiful Creatures (#1), Beautiful Darkness (#2), Beautiful Chaos (#3) [<-COMING SOON, OCTOBER 18, 2011] by Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl
The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton
In The Forests of The Night by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes
Token of Darkness by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes
Paranormalcy (#1) and Supernaturally (#2) [<-COMING SOON, JULY 26, 2011] by Kiersten White
Intertwined (#1), Unraveled (#2), Twisted (#3) [<-COMING SOON, AUGUST 30, 2011] by Gena Showalter
Shiver (#1), Linger (#2), Forever (#3) [<-COMING SOON, JULY 12, 2011] by Maggie Stiefvater
Clockwork Angel (#1), Clockwork Prince (#2) [<-COMING SOON, DECEMBER 6, 2011] (Prequel series to Mortal Instruments) by Cassandra Clare
City of Bones (#1), City of Ashes (#2), City of Glass (#3), City of Fallen Angels (#4), and City of Lost Souls [<-COMING SOON, MAY 2012] (The Mortal Instruments series) by Cassandra Clare
Hush Hush (#1), Crescendo (#2), Silence (#3) [<-COMING SOON, OCTOBER 4, 2011] by Becca Fitzpatrick
The Angel Experiment (#1), School鈥檚 Out Forever (#2), Saving The World and Other Extreme Sports (#3), The Final Warning (#4), MAX (#5), FANG (#6), ANGEL (#7), BOOK 8 (No title yet, COMING SOON, February 2012) [Maximum Ride series by James Patterson]
GONE (#1), HUNGER (#2), LIES (#3), PLAGUE (#4), FEAR (#5) (<-COMING SOON, APRIL 3, 2012) [GONE series] by Michael Grant
Unwind by Neal Shusterman
13 Days To Midnight by Patrick Carman
Beastly by Alex Flinn
Willow by Julia Hoban
Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury
Nightshade (#1) and Wolfsbane (#2) [<-COMING SOON, JULY 26, 2011!] by Andrea CremerThe Hunger Games (3 books) by Suzanne Collins. It's basically everything that you listed put together. You should also try the Host. It's also written by Stephanie Meyer, and it's a really good book once you get into it..
Other books you should try are:
-Pretty Little Liars series (by Sara Shepard)
-Speak (by Laurie Hale Andersen)
-Wintergirls (by Laurie Hale Andersen)
- The Uglies Series (by Scott Westerfeld)
I'll tell you what the series is and then put the books in order. =)
The immortal series by Alyson Noel:
Evermore
Blue Moon
Shadowland
Dark Flame
Night Star
Everlasting
The touch series by Laurie Faria Stolarz:
Deadly Little Secret
Deadly Little Lies
Deadly Little Games
Deadly Little Voices (it comes out this november!)
The Heroes of Olympus Series by Rick Riordan (same characters from the Percy Jackson series)
The Lost Hero
The Son of Neptune (comes out this fall)
The Riley Bloom Series by Alyson Noel
Radiance
Shimmer
Dreamland (comes out this fall)
Whisper (comes out spring 2012)
The House of Night Series by PC Cast + Kristin Cast
Marked
Betrayed
Chosen
Untamed
Hunted
Tempted
Burned
Awakened
Destined (comes out this fall!)
The Wolves of Mercy Falls series by Maggie Stiefvader:
Shiver
Linger
Forever (comes out this july!)
The Kane Chronicals series by Rick Riordan:
The Red Pyramid
The Throne of Fire
these books are AMAZING!
The Game of Thrones by George RR Martin is a fantastic series!!!
I have also been enjoying The Hunger Games series, The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo, Pride and Prejudice and Zombies, Vampire for Hire series, and anything by Stephen King (IT, Misery, Needful Things, and Under the Dome are my faves).
The Darkest Powers Series by Kelly Armstrong:
The Summoning
The Awakening
The Reckoning
Well, I'm 13 and I like to read the Hunger Games, Beastly, Cirque Du Freak, The Clique, Alphas, Maximum Ride etc. They're all really good books/series!
THE HUNGER GAMES!! Im half way through the first book (their is 3) and I love it
I'm usually not a book person but I can not put this book down it is amazing :)
Don't know if you'll like this one but I loved it when I was younger. Its called Someone at the Door but I dont remember the author.
The Series of Unfortunate Events. 13 books :)
Warriors- Erin Hunter
The Qu'ran
john grisholm 'a painted house' ! and also james patterson writes for teens!
Im a girl
I prefer adventures, fantasies, romances ect.
Ive read : meg cabot, jaqueline wilson, twilight saga ( who doesnt), Harry potters, Percy Jacksons.
Basically the famous ones lol
Thnx, very much appreciated!!!Matched (#1) and Crossed (#2) [<-COMING SOON, NOVEMBER 1, 2011] by Ally Condie
Beautiful Creatures (#1), Beautiful Darkness (#2), Beautiful Chaos (#3) [<-COMING SOON, OCTOBER 18, 2011] by Kami Garcia and Margaret Stohl
The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton
In The Forests of The Night by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes
Token of Darkness by Amelia Atwater-Rhodes
Paranormalcy (#1) and Supernaturally (#2) [<-COMING SOON, JULY 26, 2011] by Kiersten White
Intertwined (#1), Unraveled (#2), Twisted (#3) [<-COMING SOON, AUGUST 30, 2011] by Gena Showalter
Shiver (#1), Linger (#2), Forever (#3) [<-COMING SOON, JULY 12, 2011] by Maggie Stiefvater
Clockwork Angel (#1), Clockwork Prince (#2) [<-COMING SOON, DECEMBER 6, 2011] (Prequel series to Mortal Instruments) by Cassandra Clare
City of Bones (#1), City of Ashes (#2), City of Glass (#3), City of Fallen Angels (#4), and City of Lost Souls [<-COMING SOON, MAY 2012] (The Mortal Instruments series) by Cassandra Clare
Hush Hush (#1), Crescendo (#2), Silence (#3) [<-COMING SOON, OCTOBER 4, 2011] by Becca Fitzpatrick
The Angel Experiment (#1), School鈥檚 Out Forever (#2), Saving The World and Other Extreme Sports (#3), The Final Warning (#4), MAX (#5), FANG (#6), ANGEL (#7), BOOK 8 (No title yet, COMING SOON, February 2012) [Maximum Ride series by James Patterson]
GONE (#1), HUNGER (#2), LIES (#3), PLAGUE (#4), FEAR (#5) (<-COMING SOON, APRIL 3, 2012) [GONE series] by Michael Grant
Unwind by Neal Shusterman
13 Days To Midnight by Patrick Carman
Beastly by Alex Flinn
Willow by Julia Hoban
Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury
Nightshade (#1) and Wolfsbane (#2) [<-COMING SOON, JULY 26, 2011!] by Andrea CremerThe Hunger Games (3 books) by Suzanne Collins. It's basically everything that you listed put together. You should also try the Host. It's also written by Stephanie Meyer, and it's a really good book once you get into it..
Other books you should try are:
-Pretty Little Liars series (by Sara Shepard)
-Speak (by Laurie Hale Andersen)
-Wintergirls (by Laurie Hale Andersen)
- The Uglies Series (by Scott Westerfeld)
I'll tell you what the series is and then put the books in order. =)
The immortal series by Alyson Noel:
Evermore
Blue Moon
Shadowland
Dark Flame
Night Star
Everlasting
The touch series by Laurie Faria Stolarz:
Deadly Little Secret
Deadly Little Lies
Deadly Little Games
Deadly Little Voices (it comes out this november!)
The Heroes of Olympus Series by Rick Riordan (same characters from the Percy Jackson series)
The Lost Hero
The Son of Neptune (comes out this fall)
The Riley Bloom Series by Alyson Noel
Radiance
Shimmer
Dreamland (comes out this fall)
Whisper (comes out spring 2012)
The House of Night Series by PC Cast + Kristin Cast
Marked
Betrayed
Chosen
Untamed
Hunted
Tempted
Burned
Awakened
Destined (comes out this fall!)
The Wolves of Mercy Falls series by Maggie Stiefvader:
Shiver
Linger
Forever (comes out this july!)
The Kane Chronicals series by Rick Riordan:
The Red Pyramid
The Throne of Fire
these books are AMAZING!
The Game of Thrones by George RR Martin is a fantastic series!!!
I have also been enjoying The Hunger Games series, The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo, Pride and Prejudice and Zombies, Vampire for Hire series, and anything by Stephen King (IT, Misery, Needful Things, and Under the Dome are my faves).
The Darkest Powers Series by Kelly Armstrong:
The Summoning
The Awakening
The Reckoning
Well, I'm 13 and I like to read the Hunger Games, Beastly, Cirque Du Freak, The Clique, Alphas, Maximum Ride etc. They're all really good books/series!
THE HUNGER GAMES!! Im half way through the first book (their is 3) and I love it
I'm usually not a book person but I can not put this book down it is amazing :)
Don't know if you'll like this one but I loved it when I was younger. Its called Someone at the Door but I dont remember the author.
The Series of Unfortunate Events. 13 books :)
Warriors- Erin Hunter
The Qu'ran
john grisholm 'a painted house' ! and also james patterson writes for teens!
Is Thirteen Reasons Why a good book?
-Don't post any spoilers please! I just want to know if it's a good book and how is the language in the book? What ages would be appropriate to read the book? Thank you!I personally enjoyed the book but it all depends on what you normally like to read. The book is emotional and If someone who is too young reads it, they might not understand it fully. I would say it would be appropriate for anyone between the ages of 14 and up. I feel like anything younger would still enjoy it but not understand it wholeheartedly. Some of the events that take place might not be appropriate for someone younger too, depending on their morals or whatever. It is a good read though and i would definitely suggest it.It depends on what type of books you like. I loved this book because it's so interesting and so beautifully written. Its a young adult novel ao teenagers I'm guessing on the age appropriate. I don't quite now if your asking if there's bad language. I don't remember reading any but I could have skimmed over it.
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SPOILER ALERT
Snapes kills Dumbledore.
Why don't you go see yourself or look up some reviews? We're not mind readers, we don't know what you like.
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SPOILER ALERT
Snapes kills Dumbledore.
Why don't you go see yourself or look up some reviews? We're not mind readers, we don't know what you like.
Whats The Name Of This Book?
-Its Like The Same As "Coraline" But She Has A Hairless Cat..Guess That All I Can Tell...Such A Weird Book...OMG I know that book my friend read it.... what is it.. what is it.. when I saw the cover I thought about coraline too..... hmm....
EDIT: may bird and the ever after
is that it?
look it up on google, always helps me.
EDIT: may bird and the ever after
is that it?
look it up on google, always helps me.
Where can i sell my books?
-I have a bunch of novels (not textbooks) lying around my house. I'd like to know whether there is a good website where i can sell my books. They are all in pretty good shape.
Thanks!!E Bay or Amazon.
amazon.com
ebay.com
Thanks!!E Bay or Amazon.
amazon.com
ebay.com
Please review my story?
-The air felt heavy, sticky, musty. It suffocated any chance of my lungs taking in a full breath. I crept up the stairs, tiptoeing past my father, who was sitting on the couch reading one of his Zone books, mumbling to himself and writing notes in the margin.
I held my breath, hoping I wouldn鈥檛 disturb him. I carried a pile of freshly folded towels in my arms, and put them on the little storage table outside the bathroom. After peeking in mom鈥檚 room to see if she was asleep, I decided all was calm and exhaled, then regretted it because of the pungent smell of waste that lingered in the bathroom. After a few minutes of standing under the hot water, my tight, achey muscles began to relax. but only after five minutes, the hot water turned icy and I hurried to wash my hair and get out.
鈥淲hat are you doing?鈥?I heard my mother鈥檚 voice from across the house.
鈥淪huttin鈥?the water off! That crazy ***** won鈥檛 get out of the shower so I can take a piss!鈥?He snapped back. His voice came from downstairs, in the old cellar.
Then, with my hair still lathered with shampoo, the water stopped short. I started to groan with frustration then caught myself and forced it back into my throat. The next second, I heard pounding on the door.
鈥淕et out of the bathroom! I need to take a piss!鈥?the acidic anger in his voice hung in the air, even after my father made this demand. I opened the door, not wanting to start an argument. I reached for a towel, but they were gone.
鈥淲hat happened to the towels?鈥?I asked.
鈥淕et out of the ******* bathroom!鈥?br>
鈥淐an I have a towel?鈥?br>
鈥淵ou don鈥檛 need a ******* towel!鈥?
鈥淧lease give me a towel, or move so I can get one myself!鈥?I raised my voice, beginning to get frustrated.
鈥淕et out of that bathroom before I make you, you stubborn *****!鈥?He came closer as he hissed this in my face, making the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. He grabbed my wrist with a tight angry fist and attempted to pull me out from behind the door. I managed to yank free from his grip and slam the door in his face. I immediately locked it, and backed to the far wall of the bathroom. I caught a glimpse of my face in the steamed mirror, and for a moment I didn鈥檛 recognize the reflection as my own. Fear and fatigue made my eyes look heavy, my face thin. My cheeks were pale and stained with tears. I rested my head in my hands and leaned on the windowsill, desperate for some fresh air. My head pounded to the beat of my fathers fists hitting the bathroom door, and shaking the doorknob.
鈥淪top! Please, stop!鈥?Silence. Then, something hit the door and crashed to the floor.
鈥淵ou ******* asshole!鈥?My mother鈥檚 voice now. I sighed and sank to the floor, tears streaming heavily now. 鈥淪top! Get away from me! Oh my God, Dennis! Stop!鈥?She screamed.
鈥淵ou stubborn *****. She鈥檚 just like you. Just like you and you鈥檙e mother. All three of you are all the same worthless pieces of ****.鈥?He hissed, his voice getting lower and lower. I recognized that voice, and it gave me chills. I knew he was getting closer and closer to her with every second passing, spitting every intimidating word.
鈥淚 swear, dennis,鈥?she warned, 鈥淚 will call the cops.鈥濃€淒on鈥檛 you dare.鈥?He threatened.
鈥淥r what? You can鈥檛 touch me. They鈥檒l lock you up.鈥?br>
鈥淭hey haven鈥檛 yet.鈥?He whispered, only loud enough for me to hear, a few feet away. Silence. One mississippi, two mississippi, I counted. Oh God. Make it stop. Please. Let it be over. I heard a weak whimper from my mother, and I wasn鈥檛 sure if it was a sigh of relief or a gasp from fear.
I heard footsteps to the bathroom and a light tap on the door.
鈥淗oney, let me in.鈥?Her voice was weak and hoarse, but free of the fear that I heard before. My butt stuck to the floor as I tried to get up. My father鈥檚 aim is to blame there.Liked it. In the beginning I think if you just said "the air heavy" that would be good enough. Other than that, perfect.
I held my breath, hoping I wouldn鈥檛 disturb him. I carried a pile of freshly folded towels in my arms, and put them on the little storage table outside the bathroom. After peeking in mom鈥檚 room to see if she was asleep, I decided all was calm and exhaled, then regretted it because of the pungent smell of waste that lingered in the bathroom. After a few minutes of standing under the hot water, my tight, achey muscles began to relax. but only after five minutes, the hot water turned icy and I hurried to wash my hair and get out.
鈥淲hat are you doing?鈥?I heard my mother鈥檚 voice from across the house.
鈥淪huttin鈥?the water off! That crazy ***** won鈥檛 get out of the shower so I can take a piss!鈥?He snapped back. His voice came from downstairs, in the old cellar.
Then, with my hair still lathered with shampoo, the water stopped short. I started to groan with frustration then caught myself and forced it back into my throat. The next second, I heard pounding on the door.
鈥淕et out of the bathroom! I need to take a piss!鈥?the acidic anger in his voice hung in the air, even after my father made this demand. I opened the door, not wanting to start an argument. I reached for a towel, but they were gone.
鈥淲hat happened to the towels?鈥?I asked.
鈥淕et out of the ******* bathroom!鈥?br>
鈥淐an I have a towel?鈥?br>
鈥淵ou don鈥檛 need a ******* towel!鈥?
鈥淧lease give me a towel, or move so I can get one myself!鈥?I raised my voice, beginning to get frustrated.
鈥淕et out of that bathroom before I make you, you stubborn *****!鈥?He came closer as he hissed this in my face, making the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. He grabbed my wrist with a tight angry fist and attempted to pull me out from behind the door. I managed to yank free from his grip and slam the door in his face. I immediately locked it, and backed to the far wall of the bathroom. I caught a glimpse of my face in the steamed mirror, and for a moment I didn鈥檛 recognize the reflection as my own. Fear and fatigue made my eyes look heavy, my face thin. My cheeks were pale and stained with tears. I rested my head in my hands and leaned on the windowsill, desperate for some fresh air. My head pounded to the beat of my fathers fists hitting the bathroom door, and shaking the doorknob.
鈥淪top! Please, stop!鈥?Silence. Then, something hit the door and crashed to the floor.
鈥淵ou ******* asshole!鈥?My mother鈥檚 voice now. I sighed and sank to the floor, tears streaming heavily now. 鈥淪top! Get away from me! Oh my God, Dennis! Stop!鈥?She screamed.
鈥淵ou stubborn *****. She鈥檚 just like you. Just like you and you鈥檙e mother. All three of you are all the same worthless pieces of ****.鈥?He hissed, his voice getting lower and lower. I recognized that voice, and it gave me chills. I knew he was getting closer and closer to her with every second passing, spitting every intimidating word.
鈥淚 swear, dennis,鈥?she warned, 鈥淚 will call the cops.鈥濃€淒on鈥檛 you dare.鈥?He threatened.
鈥淥r what? You can鈥檛 touch me. They鈥檒l lock you up.鈥?br>
鈥淭hey haven鈥檛 yet.鈥?He whispered, only loud enough for me to hear, a few feet away. Silence. One mississippi, two mississippi, I counted. Oh God. Make it stop. Please. Let it be over. I heard a weak whimper from my mother, and I wasn鈥檛 sure if it was a sigh of relief or a gasp from fear.
I heard footsteps to the bathroom and a light tap on the door.
鈥淗oney, let me in.鈥?Her voice was weak and hoarse, but free of the fear that I heard before. My butt stuck to the floor as I tried to get up. My father鈥檚 aim is to blame there.Liked it. In the beginning I think if you just said "the air heavy" that would be good enough. Other than that, perfect.
What is the process for finding a literary agent?
-It has always been my dream to pursue a career in writing. I am finally gaining the confidence I need to complete my first novel, however, it is not yet to that point. I am wondering if I should contact a literary agent and give them the proposal for my book along with the required pages now, or if it is necessary to wait until the book is 100% finished to do so.
If you have any reputable sources to search for a literary agent that accepts queries for mainstream fiction, that would also be greatly appreciated.Nope, Tracey, that's not how it works. Since you're not finished with the book, I suggest you take whatever free time you have when you're not writing to start doing some in-depth research into publishing. Visit and follow literary agent, publisher and editor blogs. Follow them on Twitter. Hang around other writers who are seriously trying to get published. Editors and agents give out good advice to wannabe authors and they also give good insights to the world of publishing. If you find just one blog then you can find many more because they tend to link to each other. :D
First, don't query agents or publishers until you have a completed book. If they ask for the full manuscript and it's not complete then you've just ruined an opportunity. In fact, one person on this site said she queried an agent and the agent asked for the full manuscript. The person was still writing it so the agent told her never mind. Missed opportunity. The only way you can query before the book is complete is if it's non-fiction (memoirs don't count because they're treated like novels) or if you're an established author. Everyone else has to write, edit, and polish the whole manuscript first.
aaronline.org is a good place to find agents. I've heard agentquery.com is good, but I"ve never used that site. Build your own list. If you get a list from a third-part site then ALWAYS check the agent's website for the most up-to-date info. Third-party sites might have outdated info, so don't rely on them.
Chances are low that the very first novel you write will be published (your first few novels are usually practice novels to make you a better writer). So, when you've finished this one, whether you decide to query it or not, make sure you start on another project. You need to build up your writing skill and there's no guarantee that what you're writing now will ever be published, so you'll always want other projects in the works if you ever want to be published.Finish the manuscript before you begin looking for an agent or publisher. No one can read or sell the book in your head, so the least you can do is complete it; correct it; edit it; and polish it to the best of your ability and then some.
agentquery.com lists some literary agents.
I believe science fiction and fantasy writers website also has a list of agents. But there is a book called writers market check it out in the library or get a copy for yourself and jot down the agents who rep your genre, word count and whose submission guidelines you fit. Not everyone wants what you write and you don't write for everyone.
More than likely, agents won't care about incomplete work. They want to see if you have finished something that they might have a shot at making money off of.
Needless to say, you have to do research for agents--not just because no one here knows any agents that would be best based on your location and novel genre/target audience but also because every agent has different submission standards. What's acceptable for one agent might get chucked into the trash by another.
Also, take into consideration the very low chance of being published. I wouldn't expect to make a living career (per se) off of writing.
You should finish your novel first, proofread it, get a second opinion on your book, and then get an agent to that he/she can help you deliver your copy. Your agent can then work w/ your options more if your book is finished.
I think any literary agent should do. I don't think they judge on genre.
Sorry if I couldn't help as much as other answer-ers can!
It's best to finish your novel 100%. Edit, revise, rewrite and have others read it. Then, go to agentquery.com and find an agent that will represent your genre. Follow their submission guidelines for query letters, and be patient.
If you have any reputable sources to search for a literary agent that accepts queries for mainstream fiction, that would also be greatly appreciated.Nope, Tracey, that's not how it works. Since you're not finished with the book, I suggest you take whatever free time you have when you're not writing to start doing some in-depth research into publishing. Visit and follow literary agent, publisher and editor blogs. Follow them on Twitter. Hang around other writers who are seriously trying to get published. Editors and agents give out good advice to wannabe authors and they also give good insights to the world of publishing. If you find just one blog then you can find many more because they tend to link to each other. :D
First, don't query agents or publishers until you have a completed book. If they ask for the full manuscript and it's not complete then you've just ruined an opportunity. In fact, one person on this site said she queried an agent and the agent asked for the full manuscript. The person was still writing it so the agent told her never mind. Missed opportunity. The only way you can query before the book is complete is if it's non-fiction (memoirs don't count because they're treated like novels) or if you're an established author. Everyone else has to write, edit, and polish the whole manuscript first.
aaronline.org is a good place to find agents. I've heard agentquery.com is good, but I"ve never used that site. Build your own list. If you get a list from a third-part site then ALWAYS check the agent's website for the most up-to-date info. Third-party sites might have outdated info, so don't rely on them.
Chances are low that the very first novel you write will be published (your first few novels are usually practice novels to make you a better writer). So, when you've finished this one, whether you decide to query it or not, make sure you start on another project. You need to build up your writing skill and there's no guarantee that what you're writing now will ever be published, so you'll always want other projects in the works if you ever want to be published.Finish the manuscript before you begin looking for an agent or publisher. No one can read or sell the book in your head, so the least you can do is complete it; correct it; edit it; and polish it to the best of your ability and then some.
agentquery.com lists some literary agents.
I believe science fiction and fantasy writers website also has a list of agents. But there is a book called writers market check it out in the library or get a copy for yourself and jot down the agents who rep your genre, word count and whose submission guidelines you fit. Not everyone wants what you write and you don't write for everyone.
More than likely, agents won't care about incomplete work. They want to see if you have finished something that they might have a shot at making money off of.
Needless to say, you have to do research for agents--not just because no one here knows any agents that would be best based on your location and novel genre/target audience but also because every agent has different submission standards. What's acceptable for one agent might get chucked into the trash by another.
Also, take into consideration the very low chance of being published. I wouldn't expect to make a living career (per se) off of writing.
You should finish your novel first, proofread it, get a second opinion on your book, and then get an agent to that he/she can help you deliver your copy. Your agent can then work w/ your options more if your book is finished.
I think any literary agent should do. I don't think they judge on genre.
Sorry if I couldn't help as much as other answer-ers can!
It's best to finish your novel 100%. Edit, revise, rewrite and have others read it. Then, go to agentquery.com and find an agent that will represent your genre. Follow their submission guidelines for query letters, and be patient.
What are your top 10 favorite Harry Potter characters?
-Not based on the movies of the actors/actresses.
Mine are:
1. Remus Lupin
2. Ron
3. Neville
4. Tonks
5. Fred & George
6. Snape
7. Albus Dumbledore
8. Sirius
9. Dobby
10. Kreacher
But all in all, I love every single character in Harry Potter. <3In order
Albus Dumbledore-great, powerful wizard.
Lord Voldemort-really powerful, evil, and cruel. I like both evil and good characters. I also like the fact that he can commit such cruel acts without mercy.
Severus Snape-he was a hero in the end. He continously risked his life to honor Lily by protecting her son. He also killed Dumbledore, so the old man could have some peace.
Sirius Black-cool wizard. Too bad he had to die :(
Bellatrix Lestrange-She is just maniacal >:D I love her!
Hermione Granger-she is really smart, and a really good witch. She also overcomes many of her fears along the way(such as her fear of Voldemort's name)
Dobby- He saved Harry's life, and tried to help Harry countless times.
Fred Weasley- love his inventions
George Weasley- love his inventions
Remus Lupin- he's really brave. He also gave his life to protect Harry and Hogwarts(like most of the people mentioned above)
But, I love almost all of the Harry Potter characters. They're all really great! (except Pettigrew, and Fenrir Greyback, I hate them)1. Sirius Black
2. Remus Lupin
3. Tonks
4. Fred Weasley
5. Snape
6. George Weasley
7. Neville Longbottem
8. Luna Lovegood
9. Ginny Weasley
10. Lucius Malfoy
;) Thanks for the fun quiz!
1 and 2) Fred and George Weasley
3) Hermione
4) Snape
5) Ron
6) Dobby
7) Draco
8) Sirius
9) Tonks
10) Voldemort (I know he's the antagonist, but he's an awesome antagonist) :P
1. Lord Voldemort
2. Sirius Black
3. Luna Lovegood
4. Aberforth Dumbledore
5. Scabior
6. Severus Snape
7. Ron Weasley
8. Rubeus Hagrid
9. Draco Malfoy
10. Bellatrix Lestrange
1.Luna Lovegood
2.Dobby
3.Hermionie
4.Bealatrix Lestrange
5.Sirius
6.Ginny
7.Neville
8.Tonks
9.Lupin
10.Mrs.Weasley
1. Snape
2. Hermione
3. Ron
4. Harry
5. Dumbledore
6. Dobby
7. Sirius
8. Molly Weasley
9. Neville
10. Luna
<3
Snape's my favourite :D
1. Fred& George
2. Luna
3. Sirius
4. Dumbledore
5. Kreacher
6. Lupin
7. Hermionie (?)
8. Neville
9. Ginny
10. Snape
1. Draco
2. Dumbledore
3. Snape
4. Hagrid
5. Hermione
6. Ron
7. Harry
8. Dobby
9. Sirius
10. Neville
1.ginny
2.Hermione
3Ron
4.Harry
5.Sirius
6.Draco
7.snape
8.dumbledore
9.Lupin
10.krum
1 - Tom Riddle
2 - Albus Dumbledore
3 - Severus Snape
4 - Sirius Black
5 - Luna Lovegood
6 - Harry Potter
7 - Hermoine Granger
8 - Remus Lupin
9 - Dobby
10 - Bellatrix Lestrange / Fred & George
1. Hermione
2. Ron
3. Fred & George
4. Luna
5. Lupin
6. Dobby
7. McGonagal
8. Snape
9. Harry
10. Tonks
Mine are:
1. Remus Lupin
2. Ron
3. Neville
4. Tonks
5. Fred & George
6. Snape
7. Albus Dumbledore
8. Sirius
9. Dobby
10. Kreacher
But all in all, I love every single character in Harry Potter. <3In order
Albus Dumbledore-great, powerful wizard.
Lord Voldemort-really powerful, evil, and cruel. I like both evil and good characters. I also like the fact that he can commit such cruel acts without mercy.
Severus Snape-he was a hero in the end. He continously risked his life to honor Lily by protecting her son. He also killed Dumbledore, so the old man could have some peace.
Sirius Black-cool wizard. Too bad he had to die :(
Bellatrix Lestrange-She is just maniacal >:D I love her!
Hermione Granger-she is really smart, and a really good witch. She also overcomes many of her fears along the way(such as her fear of Voldemort's name)
Dobby- He saved Harry's life, and tried to help Harry countless times.
Fred Weasley- love his inventions
George Weasley- love his inventions
Remus Lupin- he's really brave. He also gave his life to protect Harry and Hogwarts(like most of the people mentioned above)
But, I love almost all of the Harry Potter characters. They're all really great! (except Pettigrew, and Fenrir Greyback, I hate them)1. Sirius Black
2. Remus Lupin
3. Tonks
4. Fred Weasley
5. Snape
6. George Weasley
7. Neville Longbottem
8. Luna Lovegood
9. Ginny Weasley
10. Lucius Malfoy
;) Thanks for the fun quiz!
1 and 2) Fred and George Weasley
3) Hermione
4) Snape
5) Ron
6) Dobby
7) Draco
8) Sirius
9) Tonks
10) Voldemort (I know he's the antagonist, but he's an awesome antagonist) :P
1. Lord Voldemort
2. Sirius Black
3. Luna Lovegood
4. Aberforth Dumbledore
5. Scabior
6. Severus Snape
7. Ron Weasley
8. Rubeus Hagrid
9. Draco Malfoy
10. Bellatrix Lestrange
1.Luna Lovegood
2.Dobby
3.Hermionie
4.Bealatrix Lestrange
5.Sirius
6.Ginny
7.Neville
8.Tonks
9.Lupin
10.Mrs.Weasley
1. Snape
2. Hermione
3. Ron
4. Harry
5. Dumbledore
6. Dobby
7. Sirius
8. Molly Weasley
9. Neville
10. Luna
<3
Snape's my favourite :D
1. Fred& George
2. Luna
3. Sirius
4. Dumbledore
5. Kreacher
6. Lupin
7. Hermionie (?)
8. Neville
9. Ginny
10. Snape
1. Draco
2. Dumbledore
3. Snape
4. Hagrid
5. Hermione
6. Ron
7. Harry
8. Dobby
9. Sirius
10. Neville
1.ginny
2.Hermione
3Ron
4.Harry
5.Sirius
6.Draco
7.snape
8.dumbledore
9.Lupin
10.krum
1 - Tom Riddle
2 - Albus Dumbledore
3 - Severus Snape
4 - Sirius Black
5 - Luna Lovegood
6 - Harry Potter
7 - Hermoine Granger
8 - Remus Lupin
9 - Dobby
10 - Bellatrix Lestrange / Fred & George
1. Hermione
2. Ron
3. Fred & George
4. Luna
5. Lupin
6. Dobby
7. McGonagal
8. Snape
9. Harry
10. Tonks
Tell me what you think?
-Just a little story I threw together awhile back. I don't care what the feedback is, as long as it's feedback. Thank you.
http://teenink.com/fiction/realistic_fic鈥?/a>I couldn't read it all sorry :/ It just didn't capture my attention. Sorry again...
It's not that it's bad. But it's not interesting either.
;)I love it. you really drew me into the story. I think you should do something more with your writing. Would you review mine
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http://teenink.com/fiction/realistic_fic鈥?/a>I couldn't read it all sorry :/ It just didn't capture my attention. Sorry again...
It's not that it's bad. But it's not interesting either.
;)I love it. you really drew me into the story. I think you should do something more with your writing. Would you review mine
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What is the shortest of the nonfiction books?
-For extra credit, I was given a list of seven nonfiction titles and I have to pick one for a book report. Which of these seven are shortest?
1. Naturalist by E.O. Wilson
2. The Diversity of Life by E. O. Wilson
3. The Double Helix by James Watson
4. Darwin's God by Kenneth Miller
5. The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks by Rebecca Skloot
6. Cloning After Dolly (Who's Still Afraid) by Gregory Pence
7. Genome by Matt Ridley
**Please note, I am not a lazy student, this is for AP Biology my 10th year, and I have until August 18th to do this, handwrite 8 chapters of definitions, take 50 photos for terms, read The Story of American Freedom and take notes, read the Federalist Papers and take notes, and read Shakespeare's Midsummer Night's Dream. I have already read two other books and done 1/2 of my AP Biology assignments. I am trying to get it all done, but I also have golf tryouts and then practice every day in August. I don't have a lot of time to work on all of this!It's just stupid. Even if you pick a book that's 100 pages longer than the rest, how long does it take to read 100 pages?
Especially if it means you have more to write about and it makes the whole thing easier.
Don't be short sighted with this....
1. Naturalist by E.O. Wilson
2. The Diversity of Life by E. O. Wilson
3. The Double Helix by James Watson
4. Darwin's God by Kenneth Miller
5. The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks by Rebecca Skloot
6. Cloning After Dolly (Who's Still Afraid) by Gregory Pence
7. Genome by Matt Ridley
**Please note, I am not a lazy student, this is for AP Biology my 10th year, and I have until August 18th to do this, handwrite 8 chapters of definitions, take 50 photos for terms, read The Story of American Freedom and take notes, read the Federalist Papers and take notes, and read Shakespeare's Midsummer Night's Dream. I have already read two other books and done 1/2 of my AP Biology assignments. I am trying to get it all done, but I also have golf tryouts and then practice every day in August. I don't have a lot of time to work on all of this!It's just stupid. Even if you pick a book that's 100 pages longer than the rest, how long does it take to read 100 pages?
Especially if it means you have more to write about and it makes the whole thing easier.
Don't be short sighted with this....
Examples of authors writing characters like them in their works?
-I'm writing an essay on how F. Scott Fitzgerald paralleled himself in Jay Gatsby and would like to mention other examples of authors writing themselves into literature. Please help, thank you! :)Charles Dickens in David Copperfield
Hermann Hesse in Steppenwolf
D H Lawrence in The Rainbow
Henry James in The Portrait of a Lady
E M Forster in Howards End
Those are off the top of my head - will have a bigger think though :)
Hermann Hesse in Steppenwolf
D H Lawrence in The Rainbow
Henry James in The Portrait of a Lady
E M Forster in Howards End
Those are off the top of my head - will have a bigger think though :)
What do you guys think of kindles?
-How much are they? Are they worth the buy? There's a lot of different brands, which is the best one? How much do you have to pay for books once you own a kindle? I saw one at Barnes & Noble and am very interested. Thank you!I really like my NookColor. It's no less portable than a book, I put 100 books on it for $6, and I can play Angry Birds. The only slight downside is that it has a pretty ordinary battery span of 8 hours, instead of the crazy long battery life of the e-ink reader, like the Kindle. The batteries the NookColor does have also make it a lot heavier than a Kindle, but not heavier than a hard cover book.
I can also get books some through my favorite local book store, and google-books, and put those on my nook, I don't know if I can do that with a kindle. You can also get library books on a Nook, but I haven't tried that myself. My NookColor broke while I was on vacation, I took it to the B&N store, and they arranged to have a replacement shipped that week, no hassle, no problem. I didn't even have a receipt, as my mother had bought it for me in another city. And of course, all the money that I'd spent on books and apps was perfectly safe; I just downloaded my old books and apps to the new nook when it arrived.
My mom bought a Nook Colour, which is probably what you saw at B&N. Amazon has the Kindle.
They are around $200. My mom thinks the buy was worth it, but she uses it like a tablet instead of for books o - O;; Kindle and Nook are the best you can get. You pay MUCH less for books on an e-reader (I have the Nook app on my iPhone and was able to purchase "The Count of Monte Cristo" for three dollars).
I definitely prefer books. They're more portable, you can drop them as many times as you want to and they probably won't break, if they're lost or stolen the value lost is much less than if your e-reader is stolen, they don't have touch screens that malfunction ... there is something amazing about holding a book and hearing actual pages turn(:
Kindle is THE BOMB and you should get one! Other eReaders just aren't quite as good. <3 Kindle!
Hard copy of the ACTUAL book in ur hand is so much better....trust me....dont buy a kindle......
I can also get books some through my favorite local book store, and google-books, and put those on my nook, I don't know if I can do that with a kindle. You can also get library books on a Nook, but I haven't tried that myself. My NookColor broke while I was on vacation, I took it to the B&N store, and they arranged to have a replacement shipped that week, no hassle, no problem. I didn't even have a receipt, as my mother had bought it for me in another city. And of course, all the money that I'd spent on books and apps was perfectly safe; I just downloaded my old books and apps to the new nook when it arrived.
My mom bought a Nook Colour, which is probably what you saw at B&N. Amazon has the Kindle.
They are around $200. My mom thinks the buy was worth it, but she uses it like a tablet instead of for books o - O;; Kindle and Nook are the best you can get. You pay MUCH less for books on an e-reader (I have the Nook app on my iPhone and was able to purchase "The Count of Monte Cristo" for three dollars).
I definitely prefer books. They're more portable, you can drop them as many times as you want to and they probably won't break, if they're lost or stolen the value lost is much less than if your e-reader is stolen, they don't have touch screens that malfunction ... there is something amazing about holding a book and hearing actual pages turn(:
Kindle is THE BOMB and you should get one! Other eReaders just aren't quite as good. <3 Kindle!
Hard copy of the ACTUAL book in ur hand is so much better....trust me....dont buy a kindle......
Tell me what type of story do publishers want?
-People used to write phantom and dragon stories, Now publishers don't really want those any more. what do they really expect from young authors like us, if i may ask?
Do they wish to have more books like Harry Potter?if you arent already an author then you should start with a romance novel, unless you have some kick a ss story in mind like HP, but otherwise ive heard that romance novels are accepted more easily than others by publishers.
No more fantasies! They get 1000s of those!
Do they wish to have more books like Harry Potter?if you arent already an author then you should start with a romance novel, unless you have some kick a ss story in mind like HP, but otherwise ive heard that romance novels are accepted more easily than others by publishers.
No more fantasies! They get 1000s of those!
Im writing a book, what could the mystery be?
-So far this girl has seen this spooky house across the road its an empty house. This house has a magical mystery, and shes going to investigate it but i have no idea what the mystery is!?? help!Ideas for your book-
Maybe when the girl goes to investigate she finds this trap hole leading into some other dimension or different place in the world where she can only get back if she helps do something etc. Has this girl got all her family, because I was thinking say her mum had disappeared and was then found dead somewhere, it could be the same in the parallel world and when she solves her mums disappearance and death in the other world it helps her solve it in the real world when she gets back.
Or if its just a magical mystery place the girl could enter and keep on seeing flashbacks of someone's life, it turns out in one of the flashbacks the girl see's that this person is enclosed in the walls of the house along with all the magic and to escape this person needs the locket/or some other object- which this person stole from somewhere (sorry no ideas where)- to be returned, and when that happens the girl can free this person and the magic the house holds from its imprisonment caused by this locket/other object.
Hope I helped give you some ideas you can work on, sorry if my ideas are older than what you intended like with the whole death of the mum, I'm writing a teenage book so my idea's may be for an older audience than what you wanted- sorry you never specified. I also hate sad endings so these are both happy endings, but if you dislike happy endings you can change the endings by even though the girl solved the mystery in the other world the evidence has all been wiped out in the real world so she cannot solve the real mystery of her life, in the true world. Also say the girl finds the locket/other object, the descendants of the person the locket/other object belonged to in the first place before being stolen have all died off so there is no one to give the locket to, therefore the person in the walls will be stuck there forever as the girl has no where to return it to. Hope you get good answers for your question...You need to find the central plot before you start. Otherwise you have no idea where you're going, and you'll end up nowhere.
Ask yourself, "What would happen if...?" and go from there.
Find it yourself.
Then you're not writing a book.
Maybe when the girl goes to investigate she finds this trap hole leading into some other dimension or different place in the world where she can only get back if she helps do something etc. Has this girl got all her family, because I was thinking say her mum had disappeared and was then found dead somewhere, it could be the same in the parallel world and when she solves her mums disappearance and death in the other world it helps her solve it in the real world when she gets back.
Or if its just a magical mystery place the girl could enter and keep on seeing flashbacks of someone's life, it turns out in one of the flashbacks the girl see's that this person is enclosed in the walls of the house along with all the magic and to escape this person needs the locket/or some other object- which this person stole from somewhere (sorry no ideas where)- to be returned, and when that happens the girl can free this person and the magic the house holds from its imprisonment caused by this locket/other object.
Hope I helped give you some ideas you can work on, sorry if my ideas are older than what you intended like with the whole death of the mum, I'm writing a teenage book so my idea's may be for an older audience than what you wanted- sorry you never specified. I also hate sad endings so these are both happy endings, but if you dislike happy endings you can change the endings by even though the girl solved the mystery in the other world the evidence has all been wiped out in the real world so she cannot solve the real mystery of her life, in the true world. Also say the girl finds the locket/other object, the descendants of the person the locket/other object belonged to in the first place before being stolen have all died off so there is no one to give the locket to, therefore the person in the walls will be stuck there forever as the girl has no where to return it to. Hope you get good answers for your question...You need to find the central plot before you start. Otherwise you have no idea where you're going, and you'll end up nowhere.
Ask yourself, "What would happen if...?" and go from there.
Find it yourself.
Then you're not writing a book.
Harry Potter fans - Do you have any funny/rude parts of Harry Potter to share?
-What I mean is like this:
'He [Harry] was on all fours again on Snape鈥檚 office floor. "Well, we鈥檒l soon find out, won鈥檛 we?鈥?said Snape smoothly.
鈥淲and out, Potter.鈥?Harry moved into his usual position鈥?
"Snape!" ejaculated Slughorn who looked the most shaken, pale and sweating? (thanks to 19955)
Like where they sound rude :Dwell I've discovered a very fun game :) when reading Harry Potter mentally change the word "Wand" to "willy" or W ang" can lead to quite funny results. for example:
"my willy" said ron in a shaky voice" look at my willy" rons willy had snapped almost in two the end was dangling limply held on by a few splinters. ;) i have a bit of a dirty mind
"Panting, Harry fell forwards over the hydrangea bush, straightened up and stared around...there were several faces peering through nearby windows. Harry stuffed his willy hastily back into his jeans and tried to look innocent" - book 5
There was no need to stick the willy in that hard," he said gruffly, clambering to his feet. "It hurt - horace slughorn book 6
makes me laff :)What I found disapointing and suffered while I watched was the moment Harry has his first kiss the whole film was poor and ruined the family film by making it too much about love. This film is aimed at children and they do not need to be thinking about love and kissing at this age it is bad enough they see it on High School Musical, Glee and all the other rubbish that they watch.
I may sound a bore but it was not plesent watching people play "children" for children mostly yet fill their head with ideias that we "must" be looking for someone and kiss them too or they will feel regected otherwise.
I don't know if this is one, but in Book 4 Fleur and Roger left the dance and went outside and hid in some rose brushes and when Hagrid was talking about his mother, it said something like 'They seemed really busy and were making alot of noise' - something like that anyway :D
Dumbledore's brother also charmed a goat in some way. It was never explaned but the readers know he liked his goats a little too much
One thing has always puzzled me about Hagrid's parentage. He is half-giant. His dad was human, and apparently quite a small human. We can see from the books and the movies that giants are, well, giant. As big as houses, they are described. Sooo, you might guess where I'm going with this... How?? I mean, physically, how??? Did some one invent an 'engorgiarmus' spell?
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I rest my case.
"Whoops - My wand is a little over excited." Gilderoy Lockhart
'He [Harry] was on all fours again on Snape鈥檚 office floor. "Well, we鈥檒l soon find out, won鈥檛 we?鈥?said Snape smoothly.
鈥淲and out, Potter.鈥?Harry moved into his usual position鈥?
"Snape!" ejaculated Slughorn who looked the most shaken, pale and sweating? (thanks to 19955)
Like where they sound rude :Dwell I've discovered a very fun game :) when reading Harry Potter mentally change the word "Wand" to "willy" or W ang" can lead to quite funny results. for example:
"my willy" said ron in a shaky voice" look at my willy" rons willy had snapped almost in two the end was dangling limply held on by a few splinters. ;) i have a bit of a dirty mind
"Panting, Harry fell forwards over the hydrangea bush, straightened up and stared around...there were several faces peering through nearby windows. Harry stuffed his willy hastily back into his jeans and tried to look innocent" - book 5
There was no need to stick the willy in that hard," he said gruffly, clambering to his feet. "It hurt - horace slughorn book 6
makes me laff :)What I found disapointing and suffered while I watched was the moment Harry has his first kiss the whole film was poor and ruined the family film by making it too much about love. This film is aimed at children and they do not need to be thinking about love and kissing at this age it is bad enough they see it on High School Musical, Glee and all the other rubbish that they watch.
I may sound a bore but it was not plesent watching people play "children" for children mostly yet fill their head with ideias that we "must" be looking for someone and kiss them too or they will feel regected otherwise.
I don't know if this is one, but in Book 4 Fleur and Roger left the dance and went outside and hid in some rose brushes and when Hagrid was talking about his mother, it said something like 'They seemed really busy and were making alot of noise' - something like that anyway :D
Dumbledore's brother also charmed a goat in some way. It was never explaned but the readers know he liked his goats a little too much
One thing has always puzzled me about Hagrid's parentage. He is half-giant. His dad was human, and apparently quite a small human. We can see from the books and the movies that giants are, well, giant. As big as houses, they are described. Sooo, you might guess where I'm going with this... How?? I mean, physically, how??? Did some one invent an 'engorgiarmus' spell?
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I rest my case.
"Whoops - My wand is a little over excited." Gilderoy Lockhart
'Books & Authors' should be split into two sections. Yes?
-Not into one section called Books and one called Authors, but in one section for books (like reading books, interpreting books, what-do-you-think-of-this book questions) and one section for writing (for all those aspiring authors on here.)
I keep getting confused they're both merged into one section. What do you think?It might not be a bad idea, however, the two aren't that different. If you're a writer and you have a question about your material or topic, input from readers can be just as valuable, if not more, than input from other writers, because readers are who you're writing for. Similarly, it's been my experience that people who are the most serious about writing read more than anyone else, so if anyone has questions about books aspiring writers will likely have the answers.
Did that make any sense?
Even if they were divided into two categories, the category auto-chooser would likely bounce between the two categories. That, and a writing category would get questions about all kinds of writing--books, stories, and people trying to get people to do their homework.
I got confused as well. But here's an example of why they put them together:
What if there are 3 categories: Ice Cream, Sweets, and Pizza. 10
things are in the Pizza category, 5 things in Ice Cream, and 5
things in Sweets. They might as well put Ice Cream and Sweets
together to make Ice Cream & Sweets.
See what I mean? That way they can fit more categories.
Yes.. and no. I say that because books have authors write? And it is the same subject. But also yes, because I AM a young author taht is always looking for advice, and it would be esier just to go into authors instead of looking at all together.
Omg i was thinking the exact some thing awhile ago! haha :) but yes i do ;D
Well, if you want it go to the Yahoo suggestion board and mention it. If enough people want the same thing Yahoo might take notice.
I see your point but because the categories themselves are so small, it makes sense to be combined.
I keep getting confused they're both merged into one section. What do you think?It might not be a bad idea, however, the two aren't that different. If you're a writer and you have a question about your material or topic, input from readers can be just as valuable, if not more, than input from other writers, because readers are who you're writing for. Similarly, it's been my experience that people who are the most serious about writing read more than anyone else, so if anyone has questions about books aspiring writers will likely have the answers.
Did that make any sense?
Even if they were divided into two categories, the category auto-chooser would likely bounce between the two categories. That, and a writing category would get questions about all kinds of writing--books, stories, and people trying to get people to do their homework.
I got confused as well. But here's an example of why they put them together:
What if there are 3 categories: Ice Cream, Sweets, and Pizza. 10
things are in the Pizza category, 5 things in Ice Cream, and 5
things in Sweets. They might as well put Ice Cream and Sweets
together to make Ice Cream & Sweets.
See what I mean? That way they can fit more categories.
Yes.. and no. I say that because books have authors write? And it is the same subject. But also yes, because I AM a young author taht is always looking for advice, and it would be esier just to go into authors instead of looking at all together.
Omg i was thinking the exact some thing awhile ago! haha :) but yes i do ;D
Well, if you want it go to the Yahoo suggestion board and mention it. If enough people want the same thing Yahoo might take notice.
I see your point but because the categories themselves are so small, it makes sense to be combined.
{Percy Jackson} As Jason is the reason Percy was forced to lose his memories and be taken away to the romans..?
-Do you think Percy will hate Jason like how Percy hated Luke? I remember Percy hated Luke so much he even wanted to kill him in the end and he was going to as well. So if Percy came face to face with the boy who replaced him as Camp Half-Blood's leader, hero and who was the reason Percy was taken from Annabeth and everyone he had ever loved and made to forget everything, do you think Percy will try to kill him?Technically, it was Hera's fault. She forced Jason and Percy to lose their memories and switch places. They may have fights in the future (because of the "who's the leader here?" disagreements.) But I do believe they will reunite the Greeks and Romans at the end of the series. They could possibly be best friends because of their lifestyles and who their parents are. (on the father's side, anyway!)So, Yeah...as a point. I think Percy will be angry at first, then he may go like Luke where he thinks his father doesn't care about him but then I think he will see how much camp has changed and how much attention Leo, Piper and Jason are getting as they are the heroes now and then I think he will flip. After all, I think it was book 2 that we saw Percy getting jealous of how much attention Clarisse got after the quest but he couldn't say anything or Chiron would have to expel him as he broke the rules to go with her and in book 3 he HATED everybody looking to Thalia for help because she is a daughter of Zeus , but Percy likes Thalia...he may not like Jason, who is a son of Zeus so you never know.
Edit - Nice Picture! It is Sam from Supernatural?
Personally I don't think so.
Because it wasn't actually Jason's fault.
It was Hera's.
So I think her won't becasue Percy is crazy or mental.
And I think he would be pissed at that.
He doesn't really have a temper.
He's easy going
<3 *sigh*
Hope this helped :)
I don't think so. I giant part of how much he hated Luke was because he was jealous of how much attention Annabeth showed him. He may be a little bit jealous, but probably won't want to kill him. Yet...
Hi, ummm...I just wanted to tell you that I like your avatar pic and name :)
I LOVE Supernatural.
Edit - Nice Picture! It is Sam from Supernatural?
Personally I don't think so.
Because it wasn't actually Jason's fault.
It was Hera's.
So I think her won't becasue Percy is crazy or mental.
And I think he would be pissed at that.
He doesn't really have a temper.
He's easy going
<3 *sigh*
Hope this helped :)
I don't think so. I giant part of how much he hated Luke was because he was jealous of how much attention Annabeth showed him. He may be a little bit jealous, but probably won't want to kill him. Yet...
Hi, ummm...I just wanted to tell you that I like your avatar pic and name :)
I LOVE Supernatural.
HOW DO YOU IMAGINE THE AUTHOR? PLZ BE NICE, IT'S FOR FUN! MOST DETAILED GETS TEN POINTS, I HEAR!?
-Please be detailed and include anything you wanna add. I want to know exactly, describe the way you picture the person who wrote it the way you'd describe a character you know EVERYTHING about. Most detailed gets ten points!
"Before they ruined us, we were taught. Who to trust, how to defend, the purpose of all those tests. Only the best of the best of the human race could survive. We're...not sure why, but they're still running those programs up there. Our escape routes are so none of us get caught, because we refuse to be annihilated by them, just as we feel the same about working for them. Don't get lost. Levey, oh no, you'll end up killing somebody if you let them have this power over you. Do you really want to wake up with my neck dangling out of the window, detached and lifeless, the hatched in your hand? Does that sound good to you? Are you okay, fine, just dandy with that statement permanently printed on you, a personal life sentence on your shoulders? Never trust your mind, only your emotions. Remember? We're safe now, but who can know if you were assaulted and beat up in the head before set back on your feet? I mean, would they really let me hang out here if I am whatever you now think I am? Would they really let a monster roam the halls-let's be serious. There's no way I'm the reason for security, Lev. I know you know that."
Different levels of horror escaladed, scattered across, then slowly peeled of off Levey's face, but he kept nodding nonetheless.I ddin't really understand the paragraph but I'll give you my description.
Girl.
13-15 years old.
Medium length black or dark brown hair.
No streaks.
Hazel or light brown eyes.
Height ranging rom five to five four feet.
Pale skin.
Some freckles.
Pointed nose.
Small chin.
Long eyelashes.
Thin eyebrows.
Wears black and white tee.
Either comfy sweat pants or slightly loose faded jeans, black or blue.
Ripped up Chuck Taylors.
No hair accessories.
No glasses.
Likes writing mysteries, enjoys scary/horror stuff, and once in a while needs her alone time.
Hates optimism, girliness, and sappy romances.
Is original.
Doesn't care for what others say.
Has friends, like her.
But without her friends, she's a lone wolf.
Likes to laugh, read, sketch, and chill.
Her life is the computer and electronics.
Family time? No.
Mani Pedis? No.
Haunted House? Yes.
Horror Marathon? Yes.
Hates to be labelled.
Stands out.
Sometimes the wierd girl...
But does she care?
Nope.
Hope that worked. :PI imagine some kind of self-obsessed person who cares way too much what others think. The person spends so much time preening themselves that they clearly don't listen during English lessons.
Nothing about this tells us anything about whether you're a human, a robot, or a sixty-armed spider from the planet Xyzia.
This doesn't make a lot of sense. It's nice of you to share, but maybe too much to ask for others to critique it.
Not this again!
I think the person speaking this is very... loopy? Crazy? He/she (I think it's a he) takes being tortured or pain very calmly. He's probably masochistic or was put through a harsh childhood (beatings, etc.) . He's probably a very young adult and has learned and experienced many painful things during his short life. He probably lost a close friend from drugs, suicide, or getting into the wrong crowd. He could have even killed a person before. Levey is probably a disturbed child who has killed many people (maybe in his family?) and feels no guilt. He (is Levey a girl or boy name?) has known the speaker for maybe a few months and was maybe reprehended by him for stealing and caught murdering someone in front of the speaker. Levey is in a room w/ the speaker, probably deciding to kill the speaker by tossing him out a window or cutting his head off.
This monologue was very well written and it took quite some time to characterize this speaker! Great job!
Hope you liked my guessing! Sorry if I used the word "probably" too much. I hope what I guessed was right!
I imagine the author as being a pretentious 13 year old who is very full of herself and thinks she is terribly grown-up. In ten years' time, I think she will look back on this question and cringe with embarrassment.
Here's some advice for you: if you ask people a question, they will give you an honest answer. If you only want to get nice answers, don't ask the question at all. Nobody has been mean to you. They have been honest. I don't get a good impression of the author of this piece of writing, so that's what I've explained in my answer. Why would I lie? Don't beg people for their opinions and throw your toys out of the pram when they give them.
If you just want people to tell you how great you are, go and hang out with your friends instead of expecting total strangers to fawn over you. Why would people act as cheerleaders for you?
A hyperactive thirteen year old who is bored with summer vacation and nothing to do, so they proceed to spam yahoo answers with a bunch of stupid, pointless questions. They also have glasses covering their brown eyes, pimpled face. And they're short. Girl, hair up in a ponytail/bun.
Edit: We're not "foolishly attempt at meanness" or anything. We're being honest. It's what we think. You asked for it, you get it. If you don't want honestly, then don't ask for it. Just because you think it's "mean" doesn't mean it is. Truth hurts. Can't handle that, can't handle anything.
"Before they ruined us, we were taught. Who to trust, how to defend, the purpose of all those tests. Only the best of the best of the human race could survive. We're...not sure why, but they're still running those programs up there. Our escape routes are so none of us get caught, because we refuse to be annihilated by them, just as we feel the same about working for them. Don't get lost. Levey, oh no, you'll end up killing somebody if you let them have this power over you. Do you really want to wake up with my neck dangling out of the window, detached and lifeless, the hatched in your hand? Does that sound good to you? Are you okay, fine, just dandy with that statement permanently printed on you, a personal life sentence on your shoulders? Never trust your mind, only your emotions. Remember? We're safe now, but who can know if you were assaulted and beat up in the head before set back on your feet? I mean, would they really let me hang out here if I am whatever you now think I am? Would they really let a monster roam the halls-let's be serious. There's no way I'm the reason for security, Lev. I know you know that."
Different levels of horror escaladed, scattered across, then slowly peeled of off Levey's face, but he kept nodding nonetheless.I ddin't really understand the paragraph but I'll give you my description.
Girl.
13-15 years old.
Medium length black or dark brown hair.
No streaks.
Hazel or light brown eyes.
Height ranging rom five to five four feet.
Pale skin.
Some freckles.
Pointed nose.
Small chin.
Long eyelashes.
Thin eyebrows.
Wears black and white tee.
Either comfy sweat pants or slightly loose faded jeans, black or blue.
Ripped up Chuck Taylors.
No hair accessories.
No glasses.
Likes writing mysteries, enjoys scary/horror stuff, and once in a while needs her alone time.
Hates optimism, girliness, and sappy romances.
Is original.
Doesn't care for what others say.
Has friends, like her.
But without her friends, she's a lone wolf.
Likes to laugh, read, sketch, and chill.
Her life is the computer and electronics.
Family time? No.
Mani Pedis? No.
Haunted House? Yes.
Horror Marathon? Yes.
Hates to be labelled.
Stands out.
Sometimes the wierd girl...
But does she care?
Nope.
Hope that worked. :PI imagine some kind of self-obsessed person who cares way too much what others think. The person spends so much time preening themselves that they clearly don't listen during English lessons.
Nothing about this tells us anything about whether you're a human, a robot, or a sixty-armed spider from the planet Xyzia.
This doesn't make a lot of sense. It's nice of you to share, but maybe too much to ask for others to critique it.
Not this again!
I think the person speaking this is very... loopy? Crazy? He/she (I think it's a he) takes being tortured or pain very calmly. He's probably masochistic or was put through a harsh childhood (beatings, etc.) . He's probably a very young adult and has learned and experienced many painful things during his short life. He probably lost a close friend from drugs, suicide, or getting into the wrong crowd. He could have even killed a person before. Levey is probably a disturbed child who has killed many people (maybe in his family?) and feels no guilt. He (is Levey a girl or boy name?) has known the speaker for maybe a few months and was maybe reprehended by him for stealing and caught murdering someone in front of the speaker. Levey is in a room w/ the speaker, probably deciding to kill the speaker by tossing him out a window or cutting his head off.
This monologue was very well written and it took quite some time to characterize this speaker! Great job!
Hope you liked my guessing! Sorry if I used the word "probably" too much. I hope what I guessed was right!
I imagine the author as being a pretentious 13 year old who is very full of herself and thinks she is terribly grown-up. In ten years' time, I think she will look back on this question and cringe with embarrassment.
Here's some advice for you: if you ask people a question, they will give you an honest answer. If you only want to get nice answers, don't ask the question at all. Nobody has been mean to you. They have been honest. I don't get a good impression of the author of this piece of writing, so that's what I've explained in my answer. Why would I lie? Don't beg people for their opinions and throw your toys out of the pram when they give them.
If you just want people to tell you how great you are, go and hang out with your friends instead of expecting total strangers to fawn over you. Why would people act as cheerleaders for you?
A hyperactive thirteen year old who is bored with summer vacation and nothing to do, so they proceed to spam yahoo answers with a bunch of stupid, pointless questions. They also have glasses covering their brown eyes, pimpled face. And they're short. Girl, hair up in a ponytail/bun.
Edit: We're not "foolishly attempt at meanness" or anything. We're being honest. It's what we think. You asked for it, you get it. If you don't want honestly, then don't ask for it. Just because you think it's "mean" doesn't mean it is. Truth hurts. Can't handle that, can't handle anything.
Book recommendations?
-The last books that I read that I REALLY enjoyed were Looking for Alaska, Burned, and Fahrenheit 451. I don't really know how to generally describe my taste in books but hopefully someone that has read some of those books and understands what I'm looking for. I haven't read a good book in a while and I'm desperately looking for a lengthly list of recommendations. Thank you!Blades and Dangerous Days, both by J. William Turner. Realistic fiction about Australian teens in several tense, dramatic, life and death situations set in many parts of Australia, plus California and England, and dealing with teenage, adult and social themes. Each novel is written as a series of four-books-in-one. More info in Yahoo web searchUmmm... I read mostly fantasy books, but I hope you like them...
The Inheritance Cycle
The Mysterious Benedict
Dragon Keeper series
The Shadow Thieves
The Thief Lord
Hope I helped some ;)
Geek Love by Katherine Dunn is my favorite novel.
I also recommend Confederency of Dunces.
It sounds like you would very much enjoy a vonnegut book like Slaughterhouse 5 or Cat's Cradle.
Generation X - Douglas Coupland
Paper Towns - John Green
The Shadow of the Wind - Carlos Zafon
The Perks of Being a Wallflower - Stephen Chobsky
The Curious Case of Benjamin Button - F. Scott Fitzgerald
Feed by M.T. Anderson
The Life of Pi by Yann Martel
Anthem by Ayn Rand
Phantom of the Opera
Bud, Not Buddy
Crank
The Bed of Procrustes: Philosophical and Practical Aphorisms
By Nassim Nicholas Taleb
The forest of hands and teeth by carrie ryan
The Inheritance Cycle
The Mysterious Benedict
Dragon Keeper series
The Shadow Thieves
The Thief Lord
Hope I helped some ;)
Geek Love by Katherine Dunn is my favorite novel.
I also recommend Confederency of Dunces.
It sounds like you would very much enjoy a vonnegut book like Slaughterhouse 5 or Cat's Cradle.
Generation X - Douglas Coupland
Paper Towns - John Green
The Shadow of the Wind - Carlos Zafon
The Perks of Being a Wallflower - Stephen Chobsky
The Curious Case of Benjamin Button - F. Scott Fitzgerald
Feed by M.T. Anderson
The Life of Pi by Yann Martel
Anthem by Ayn Rand
Phantom of the Opera
Bud, Not Buddy
Crank
The Bed of Procrustes: Philosophical and Practical Aphorisms
By Nassim Nicholas Taleb
The forest of hands and teeth by carrie ryan
In Harry Potter, why did James Potter and Sirius Black bully Severus Snape?
-Because James Potter was such a JERK. He wasn't just mean to Snape, he was CRUEL. There was absolutely no excuse for the way they treated him. No wonder Snape grew up with issues. James makes Draco Malfoy look nice.James and Sirius were in Gryffindor and Snape was in Slytherin. On top of that Snape had disgusting clothes and disgusting hair. James and Sirius were the popular kids. And they had to uphold their house honor to be popular. Yeah, beating kids up isn't very honorary, but he is from another house and it showed superiority.
I think James knew Severus had a crush on Lily. Also, he was kind of the underdog, poor little Snape.
Because snape was a nerd?
And james knew he was in love with lilly.
I think James knew Severus had a crush on Lily. Also, he was kind of the underdog, poor little Snape.
Because snape was a nerd?
And james knew he was in love with lilly.
Good books for hippies i.e. how to fiight the system andd live with out it?
-Anythingg will help. Will tthe whole earth catalog help?there is a great movie 'into the wild' about living without society. its based off a book which is based off a true story. i am not sure if 'into the wild' is the name of the book however.
O the story that am writing is?
-fiction, adventure, i have written 4000 words already, it was kinda a rough draft. i love to write so i took it up that i could write about 60,000 words, and that's my aim.............Umm...... Whats the bloody question?!?
That's nice . . .
Like the people above me have said what's your question? Maybe you want motivation? Want us to tell you that's an amazing job?
Hey
Im willing to offer any help you may need.
If you want you can email me and ill be there for whatever you need.
scribblezone.help@gmail.com
What's your question?
But good job!
Are you looking for a fanfare? Firework display maybe?
I'm sorry but there is no question here, just a random fact.
Your question is...?
WHAT IS THE ******* QUESTION?
I dont get wat ur question is......
That's nice . . .
Like the people above me have said what's your question? Maybe you want motivation? Want us to tell you that's an amazing job?
Hey
Im willing to offer any help you may need.
If you want you can email me and ill be there for whatever you need.
scribblezone.help@gmail.com
What's your question?
But good job!
Are you looking for a fanfare? Firework display maybe?
I'm sorry but there is no question here, just a random fact.
Your question is...?
WHAT IS THE ******* QUESTION?
I dont get wat ur question is......
In Ayn Rand's book Anthem why were men only expected to live to 40 years old?
-Because Rand pictures a Dark Ages, medieval-like dystopic future as opposed to a commonplace gadget-bound chock-full-in-technology future. She foresees irrationalism and collectivistic policies as sending humanity back to some sort of feudal times. This means going back to illiteracy, scientifically wrong beliefs (Earth is at the center of the universe, etc.) and rebooting health care and medical practices which nowadays enlarge our lives but back then couldn't keep a person alive for over 40 years (with great difficulty, of course).
A question about "The Picture of Dorian Gray" book?
-I just finished reading the book, and it's amazing, disturbing, but amazing. I just don't quite understand what happened at the end. When he stabbed the portrait with a knife, he became old and ugly and died, then the portrait returned to it's previous form but nothing happened to it. Now I understand that this portrait reflects his soul, but why did he die when he stabbed it? I mean wasn't he soulless? I am kinda confused!i think that when he stabbed the painting he released his soul which went back in to the real dorian and the force of that killed him. or that the painting is a part of him so when he stabbed the painting he was really stabbing himself which is why he died. i totally agree with you that its an amazing book and it remains one of my favourites :)I didn't think the portrait reflected his soul, did it?
I thought he sold his soul to the devil so that he didn't age anymore - the portrait aged instead.
So when he stabbed the portrait, I don't know why, but he resumed his aging as it would have been if he hadn't sold out to the devil. So he was really an old man, who was past his time of death so dies. the picture just returned to the young man that had originally been painted.
i understood it as, the pic was him/his soul, and when he destroyed the painting he got his soul back and his soul caught up with his real age
the book had a lot of gay over tones, i enjoyed the book,
I thought he sold his soul to the devil so that he didn't age anymore - the portrait aged instead.
So when he stabbed the portrait, I don't know why, but he resumed his aging as it would have been if he hadn't sold out to the devil. So he was really an old man, who was past his time of death so dies. the picture just returned to the young man that had originally been painted.
i understood it as, the pic was him/his soul, and when he destroyed the painting he got his soul back and his soul caught up with his real age
the book had a lot of gay over tones, i enjoyed the book,
What dark fantasy book is this?
-It's a picture book for a mature audience. The story focuses around toys that are brought to life (or were always living, I'm not sure). The story dealt with very dark themes such as rape, torture, and murder. The main character was some kind of jester/harlequin looking doll (or puppet).I'm pretty sure the book is The Plucker, by Gerald Brom.
http://www.amazon.com/Plucker-Illustrate鈥?/a>
Does that seem right?
http://www.amazon.com/Plucker-Illustrate鈥?/a>
Does that seem right?
Best name for the male character in my story?
-Hi everyone :) I'm writing a story about two people who meet in college and end up going to med school together and getting married. (It may sound cliche or stupid, but the way it turns out will be good, I promise). I've decided on the name Kaleigh for the main girl, but I'm trying to think of a good name for the guy. I have 3 options for his last name, and several options for his first name. His last name has to go well with the name Kaleigh as well.
He's a Southern guy from Texas who is easygoing and spontaneous. She's a bit shy, so he brings her out of her comfort zone a bit. He's very sweet and romantic, but can be sarcastic.
Last name options: Wakefield, McGraw, Montgomery (I'm leaning towards Montgomery)
First name options: Kyle, Chris, Jake, Blake, Seth, Ryan, Christian, Jason
Thank you so much for your help! Sorry for the repost, I just wanted a few more opinions, plus I changed some of the names :)I'm a writer myself, and there are three names that I absouletly love: Roben, Seth, and Anakin. For a southern guy, I would go with either Jackson or Jack, but that's just my opinion :) Try using names from people you know in real life, such as a best friend or a guy you really like. Just make it a name that's special to you!
Jonathin or Jonathan,Ryan,Justin,think of Texan names. I would go with Jason though.
I agree with the last name :]
He's a Southern guy from Texas who is easygoing and spontaneous. She's a bit shy, so he brings her out of her comfort zone a bit. He's very sweet and romantic, but can be sarcastic.
Last name options: Wakefield, McGraw, Montgomery (I'm leaning towards Montgomery)
First name options: Kyle, Chris, Jake, Blake, Seth, Ryan, Christian, Jason
Thank you so much for your help! Sorry for the repost, I just wanted a few more opinions, plus I changed some of the names :)I'm a writer myself, and there are three names that I absouletly love: Roben, Seth, and Anakin. For a southern guy, I would go with either Jackson or Jack, but that's just my opinion :) Try using names from people you know in real life, such as a best friend or a guy you really like. Just make it a name that's special to you!
Jonathin or Jonathan,Ryan,Justin,think of Texan names. I would go with Jason though.
I agree with the last name :]
I need an awesome guy name?
-I'm writing a story and I need a name for a very mysterious guy. Handsome, jet black hair, fair skin. Any ideas Please Answer! :) ThanksDamon, Jaden, Thorn, Patch, NateMysterio Seximus.
Seriously, names don't make the character. Name have nothing to do with appearance or personality. Name him anything like Norman or Bernie or Lester.
Gino.
Wolfgang.
Sven
Gale*
Percy*
Seth*
Aaron*
Zach
Mason
Raymond
Drew*
Hope these helpd (stared are faves :P)
Perry the Platypus.
Damian
Chuck (Charles)
Garret
Andrew
Cole
Micheal
Griffin
I love the name Spencer, it is well-known, yet not commonly used. It's unique!
Steven
James
Harry
Jericho :D
Lucifer, lol
Mick McManus
Derek!
Seriously, names don't make the character. Name have nothing to do with appearance or personality. Name him anything like Norman or Bernie or Lester.
Gino.
Wolfgang.
Sven
Gale*
Percy*
Seth*
Aaron*
Zach
Mason
Raymond
Drew*
Hope these helpd (stared are faves :P)
Perry the Platypus.
Damian
Chuck (Charles)
Garret
Andrew
Cole
Micheal
Griffin
I love the name Spencer, it is well-known, yet not commonly used. It's unique!
Steven
James
Harry
Jericho :D
Lucifer, lol
Mick McManus
Derek!
Is it okay for a ten year old to be writing a novel?
-Hi. Do you think its okay for a ten year old to be writing a novel?Anyone at any age can write. However the more you practice and take courses the better your work will get over time. People may think since they've been writing since they were three they are genius. Truth is plenty of that work isn't good enough to be published. But those same people if they continued to work and continued to write and improve have probably begun to take the study of writing more seriously (or given up). Ideally the older you get the more experience in life you'll acquire in order to make your work more interesting, the more people you will meet to actually base characters off of, a way to color your work with realism, creativity, and depth that you don't have at ten.
At ten you have the feelings of a ten year old. You have the eyes of a ten year old. You are only as emotional as a ten year old. At twenty five you remember how it felt to be ten. You remember what it was like to have your first crush, your first love, your first dance, your first kiss. At thirty five you might remember that first crush with such fondness, as well as your first child, your marriage and getting your first career promotion. You see from ten you can only guess at being thirty five and thirty five you know what it was like to be ten and all the ages after that. So keep that in mind.
OF COURSE IT'S OKAY! :)
I apologize, I don't mean to seem angry or aggressive - but this is the sort of question I take joy in answering as I can answer it truthfully and with the utmost confidence (as I have displayed with the very first sentence).
Anyways: I answer this way, for in my mind anyone with the hopes and dreams of getting a message out to the world or of simply publishing a story (no matter the length) can, no matter the age or the physical appearance. (Or even the mental appearance - I mean, some of the world's greatest artists were perceived as mad!) Well, anyways, getting right to the point - yes, of course it's okay for a ten year old to be writing a novel. Perhaps it may be a little difficult for him or her at times, what with the problems of structuring the story or perhaps a missed concept or hole or case of writers block, but there is always going to be some sort of inspiration or help out there - they come numerously and in different forms. And as for the editing and publishing and such? I advise that one worry about that later, after one has been all over and done with the story. Some tips are to have a basic outline written out beforehand, like the main string of events (with the addition of perhaps some details in between); and to have an adult to help through writing - not with the story writing, as that would make it not your own, but with coaching you, helping you take it step by step in a slow and timely manner. (I suppose it's alright to have an adult help you with the story, but then that adult would have to have his or her name on the front cover of the novel as well). Be careful so that this ten year old does not become overwhelmed, and also see to it that he or she does not procrastinate - a good schedule would help. So, anyways, I strongly encourage that this ten year old of whom you speak DOES write this novel - anyone can write one.
P.S. Do not think it is so very unusual, as I know of an elementary school which promotes having the students write a novel - it is even a project for those who choose to! They write it periodically, day by day and month by month with a self-calculated amount of time.
It's okay for anyone to write a novel, selling it maybe problematic, but hey, the worst that can happen is you learn something more about being an author.
Are you kidding? My bff is ten and she writes novels! It doesn't matter how old you are, just as long as your passionate about it. :)
Never too young to start writing.
Age doesn't exist in the writing world.
It's fine for ANYONE, as long as you are passionate about it.
i think its awesome! can't wait to hear about it :)
good luck
At ten you have the feelings of a ten year old. You have the eyes of a ten year old. You are only as emotional as a ten year old. At twenty five you remember how it felt to be ten. You remember what it was like to have your first crush, your first love, your first dance, your first kiss. At thirty five you might remember that first crush with such fondness, as well as your first child, your marriage and getting your first career promotion. You see from ten you can only guess at being thirty five and thirty five you know what it was like to be ten and all the ages after that. So keep that in mind.
OF COURSE IT'S OKAY! :)
I apologize, I don't mean to seem angry or aggressive - but this is the sort of question I take joy in answering as I can answer it truthfully and with the utmost confidence (as I have displayed with the very first sentence).
Anyways: I answer this way, for in my mind anyone with the hopes and dreams of getting a message out to the world or of simply publishing a story (no matter the length) can, no matter the age or the physical appearance. (Or even the mental appearance - I mean, some of the world's greatest artists were perceived as mad!) Well, anyways, getting right to the point - yes, of course it's okay for a ten year old to be writing a novel. Perhaps it may be a little difficult for him or her at times, what with the problems of structuring the story or perhaps a missed concept or hole or case of writers block, but there is always going to be some sort of inspiration or help out there - they come numerously and in different forms. And as for the editing and publishing and such? I advise that one worry about that later, after one has been all over and done with the story. Some tips are to have a basic outline written out beforehand, like the main string of events (with the addition of perhaps some details in between); and to have an adult to help through writing - not with the story writing, as that would make it not your own, but with coaching you, helping you take it step by step in a slow and timely manner. (I suppose it's alright to have an adult help you with the story, but then that adult would have to have his or her name on the front cover of the novel as well). Be careful so that this ten year old does not become overwhelmed, and also see to it that he or she does not procrastinate - a good schedule would help. So, anyways, I strongly encourage that this ten year old of whom you speak DOES write this novel - anyone can write one.
P.S. Do not think it is so very unusual, as I know of an elementary school which promotes having the students write a novel - it is even a project for those who choose to! They write it periodically, day by day and month by month with a self-calculated amount of time.
It's okay for anyone to write a novel, selling it maybe problematic, but hey, the worst that can happen is you learn something more about being an author.
Are you kidding? My bff is ten and she writes novels! It doesn't matter how old you are, just as long as your passionate about it. :)
Never too young to start writing.
Age doesn't exist in the writing world.
It's fine for ANYONE, as long as you are passionate about it.
i think its awesome! can't wait to hear about it :)
good luck
Water for Elephants main characters?
-I know Jacob, Marlena, and August are main characters, but I'm not sure where exactly to draw the line between main characters and supporting characters. Would Uncle Al, Camel, Walter, Rosemary and Rosie be main characters too?Uncle Al, Camel, Walter, and Rosemary are definitely supporting characters. Rosie might be elevated to a main character, just because she's a big part of the story.
Please read my story part 2- p.s.errors and poor spacing because of word limit?
-Dear Delaney,I鈥檓 sorry.About everything.Hopefully,when you get older you鈥檒l understand.Someone will swing by to pick you around noon.Don鈥檛 ask questions.Only bring necessities.Oh-and,don鈥檛 bother looking for me.
Iwondered if mom thought this note would count as an explanation.If anything- it only made me wonder more. I came across it just as I was collecting all of my things; it was simply an afterthought. I folded it into a small rectangle and slid it in my back pocket. Every ink splatter and dent in the paper told me she had spent some time planning out what she was going to tell me. She didn鈥檛 want to give away too much information, yet she didn鈥檛 want to leave me clueless either. I saw- at one point- she had even written 鈥?Love, mom鈥?at the bottom of the paper. Who knows why she erased it鈥?maybe she decided that I was no longer her daughter. We were only business partners鈥?commuting because it was expected of us.
A red pick-up truck pulled into the driveway ten minutes before twelve. I cursed quietly under my breath. Originally, I had planned to take off before my mother鈥檚 rescue squad arrived. It was as if they were throwing me a floater I wanted nothing to do with. 鈥淟et me drown.鈥?I wanted to yell out. 鈥?I don鈥檛 care anymore.鈥?I slung my backpack over my shoulder and took one last look around at the apartment. The landlords, Mr. and Mrs. Alderson, probably thought they had the whole story figured out. They were always badgering my mom about rent- coming up with some excuse to poke around in our apartment. If it wasn鈥檛 the water heater, it was the air conditioner- which seemed to be functioning just fine if you asked me. The Alderson鈥檚 knew I was skipping school鈥?all they needed was evidence so that they could turn me into the social workers. Sometimes, my mother would put on a show to get on their good side. She鈥檇 invite them in for dinner on Memorial Day; lighting Turkey scented candles and placing them spontaneously so that it鈥檇 smell like we actually attempted to cook something. 鈥?Delaney鈥︹€?my mother would say, instantly putting on a fake smile and making sure the Alderson鈥檚 were listening. 鈥?Be a dear and take their coats to the foyer. Make sure the furnace is on, too- it鈥檚 getting a little chilly.鈥?For one, we don鈥檛 have a foyer. Second of all, our furnace has been broken for two years. Lastly, my mom never uses the word 鈥榗hilly鈥? unless she is trying to impress someone. According to the Alderson鈥榮, we packed up and moved to Bermuda. Bermuda would probably be a lot better opposed to where I was going, though. I watched from the window as the car door swung open and revealed a pudgy looking woman around her late twenties. She had rosy cheeks and soft curls that framed her face. I couldn鈥檛 help but notice what she was wearing: a short mini-skirt over black leggings and a tube top. Great. At first, I thought about letting the strange woman stand outside of the door. It was what my mother had done to child protective services many times before. They鈥檇 wait- for a good twenty minutes- before finally deciding that nobody was home. It was a technique I had grown accustomed to. I later decided against it because I felt guilty. This woman clearly had no idea what she was getting herself into- considering the fact that she was so bright eyed and enthusiastic. Who was she, anyways? 鈥?Knock, knock.鈥?she said, in a sing-song type of voice. Her knuckles rapped against the door; sending in a very hollow tone. 鈥淎nybody home?鈥?鈥?No.鈥?I said, stubbornly- cracking the door open. Fresh air immediately wrapped itself around me. I guess it had been so long since I鈥檇 been outside, I hadn鈥檛 realized how cramped up everything was in there.There was only one window in our apartment,and mom did the best she could to cover it up.She hung a huge sheet over it and rarely let in any ventilation.The strange woman took a step inside.She looked at me andsighed. 鈥?Poor thing.鈥濃€?I don鈥檛 want your pity.鈥滻 told her tersely.鈥淟et鈥檚 just get out of here.鈥漇he nodded, and I led her around the back to where the my mother had hidden the spare key. She had slipped it under a welcome mat when we first moved in, and nobody had touched it since.鈥淚s it still there?'The woman asked me. I told her to hold on.My hand felt around for the key on the pavement,and just as I was beginning think mom had taken it along with her-my hand touched a stone cold object.Iremoved the key suddenly.It was starting to rust around the edges, and was jagged.As I held it in my hand,I tried to hold back the hurt and anger welling up inside of me. I didn鈥檛 know this woman. I didn鈥檛 know where I was going to end up.I hated my mother for doing this to me.鈥?Leave the key on the steps.鈥漷he lady remarked; suddenly waking me from my thoughts.鈥淢r.and Mrs. Alderson will collect it.鈥滻 did as I was told.As wedrove off in the red pick up truck- I saw the key; a silver glint reflecting off of it.Thekey was just like me-It sat there, alone- waiting to be claimed again.Hey
Im willing to offer any help you may need.
If you want you can email me and ill be there for whatever you need.
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Iwondered if mom thought this note would count as an explanation.If anything- it only made me wonder more. I came across it just as I was collecting all of my things; it was simply an afterthought. I folded it into a small rectangle and slid it in my back pocket. Every ink splatter and dent in the paper told me she had spent some time planning out what she was going to tell me. She didn鈥檛 want to give away too much information, yet she didn鈥檛 want to leave me clueless either. I saw- at one point- she had even written 鈥?Love, mom鈥?at the bottom of the paper. Who knows why she erased it鈥?maybe she decided that I was no longer her daughter. We were only business partners鈥?commuting because it was expected of us.
A red pick-up truck pulled into the driveway ten minutes before twelve. I cursed quietly under my breath. Originally, I had planned to take off before my mother鈥檚 rescue squad arrived. It was as if they were throwing me a floater I wanted nothing to do with. 鈥淟et me drown.鈥?I wanted to yell out. 鈥?I don鈥檛 care anymore.鈥?I slung my backpack over my shoulder and took one last look around at the apartment. The landlords, Mr. and Mrs. Alderson, probably thought they had the whole story figured out. They were always badgering my mom about rent- coming up with some excuse to poke around in our apartment. If it wasn鈥檛 the water heater, it was the air conditioner- which seemed to be functioning just fine if you asked me. The Alderson鈥檚 knew I was skipping school鈥?all they needed was evidence so that they could turn me into the social workers. Sometimes, my mother would put on a show to get on their good side. She鈥檇 invite them in for dinner on Memorial Day; lighting Turkey scented candles and placing them spontaneously so that it鈥檇 smell like we actually attempted to cook something. 鈥?Delaney鈥︹€?my mother would say, instantly putting on a fake smile and making sure the Alderson鈥檚 were listening. 鈥?Be a dear and take their coats to the foyer. Make sure the furnace is on, too- it鈥檚 getting a little chilly.鈥?For one, we don鈥檛 have a foyer. Second of all, our furnace has been broken for two years. Lastly, my mom never uses the word 鈥榗hilly鈥? unless she is trying to impress someone. According to the Alderson鈥榮, we packed up and moved to Bermuda. Bermuda would probably be a lot better opposed to where I was going, though. I watched from the window as the car door swung open and revealed a pudgy looking woman around her late twenties. She had rosy cheeks and soft curls that framed her face. I couldn鈥檛 help but notice what she was wearing: a short mini-skirt over black leggings and a tube top. Great. At first, I thought about letting the strange woman stand outside of the door. It was what my mother had done to child protective services many times before. They鈥檇 wait- for a good twenty minutes- before finally deciding that nobody was home. It was a technique I had grown accustomed to. I later decided against it because I felt guilty. This woman clearly had no idea what she was getting herself into- considering the fact that she was so bright eyed and enthusiastic. Who was she, anyways? 鈥?Knock, knock.鈥?she said, in a sing-song type of voice. Her knuckles rapped against the door; sending in a very hollow tone. 鈥淎nybody home?鈥?鈥?No.鈥?I said, stubbornly- cracking the door open. Fresh air immediately wrapped itself around me. I guess it had been so long since I鈥檇 been outside, I hadn鈥檛 realized how cramped up everything was in there.There was only one window in our apartment,and mom did the best she could to cover it up.She hung a huge sheet over it and rarely let in any ventilation.The strange woman took a step inside.She looked at me andsighed. 鈥?Poor thing.鈥濃€?I don鈥檛 want your pity.鈥滻 told her tersely.鈥淟et鈥檚 just get out of here.鈥漇he nodded, and I led her around the back to where the my mother had hidden the spare key. She had slipped it under a welcome mat when we first moved in, and nobody had touched it since.鈥淚s it still there?'The woman asked me. I told her to hold on.My hand felt around for the key on the pavement,and just as I was beginning think mom had taken it along with her-my hand touched a stone cold object.Iremoved the key suddenly.It was starting to rust around the edges, and was jagged.As I held it in my hand,I tried to hold back the hurt and anger welling up inside of me. I didn鈥檛 know this woman. I didn鈥檛 know where I was going to end up.I hated my mother for doing this to me.鈥?Leave the key on the steps.鈥漷he lady remarked; suddenly waking me from my thoughts.鈥淢r.and Mrs. Alderson will collect it.鈥滻 did as I was told.As wedrove off in the red pick up truck- I saw the key; a silver glint reflecting off of it.Thekey was just like me-It sat there, alone- waiting to be claimed again.Hey
Im willing to offer any help you may need.
If you want you can email me and ill be there for whatever you need.
scribblezone.help@gmail.com
What's the name and author of this book? Help!?
-Okay, I read this book last summer but I can't remember the name! I borrowed it from the library but whenever I go there I look for the book cover but I can't find it. It's about this girl who buys a game from this small toy shop (I think) for her boyfriend (Tom) or a party or something like that. Well, when her and Tom and their friends go to play the game they go into the game. There's these demon things that the girl saw in her Gpa's closet when she was younger and they spared her but one of them has been watching her ever since and is the person that sold her the game (I think). Anyways, the demon dude that wants her is willing to do anything to get her so he puts her and her friends through a series of traps throughout the whole book. In the end, the demon dude saves her and her friends by sacrificing himself. I think they exit the game through a picture. That's all I can remember so if you know the Name and Author please help me! Thank you!
Would you read this book?
-ok so i'm writing a book about a pioneer girl that is 13 and she was alive in the 1800 her mom died when giving birth to her little sister kristy and her dad ran away in the middle of the night and was never found or heard of again so they live with their crazy aunt maggie but when her town was attacted and her aunt and all her friends where killed her and her little sister wandered off into the world hoping to find the res of her family her dad always told her about.What do yo think?A little complicated.
Interesting.
Original.
Maybe a little depressing.
Sounds kinda sad.
But over all...
I like it.
If your going to write it you should...
it has
potential
description
creativity
originality
and
maybe even a moral.
Try it, I'd read it. :)
Ok first, you write a story because YOU want to, not anyone else. Sure, they're gonna read it, but in the end, it's your story.
And Second, :) It sounds good.
I would include citations from history. It's really good, although the ending could use some work. What happens to the main heroine?
Nope.
I don't read books with bad grammar.
Interesting.
Original.
Maybe a little depressing.
Sounds kinda sad.
But over all...
I like it.
If your going to write it you should...
it has
potential
description
creativity
originality
and
maybe even a moral.
Try it, I'd read it. :)
Ok first, you write a story because YOU want to, not anyone else. Sure, they're gonna read it, but in the end, it's your story.
And Second, :) It sounds good.
I would include citations from history. It's really good, although the ending could use some work. What happens to the main heroine?
Nope.
I don't read books with bad grammar.
Which love connection is better?
-My story is fantasy but its not fantasy romance. Romance is just a subplot. So in my story i want there to b some type of love at first sight between my MC and a boy, i had a few ideas of how exactly it wuld go, so which one do u like better?
1. When they see each other its just instant love at first sight and they feel a connection.
2. The girl (MC) earlier in the story has something that tells her the future (or whatever) and she see him and her being happy and a couple. So wen she sees him later she recognizes him but the guy also kinda feels a connection.
OR.....
3. When he sees her he instantly feels a connection and the girl kinda feels it (not as much) but then hes nice to her (she has a difficult past) and wen he kisses her, she lets him, but note it wuldnt b spread out as much, as a getting to know each other and months latter fall in love (cuz love not main plot)
So out of the 3 which one did u like best? Or if u have a better idea or want to tweak one of mine, feel free to share.
*Please excuse my text talk*
Thank You!They're all good but I think the third one is the best. C:I like ge third one the best.
DefinItely #3
I like number two the best...
i like #3 it sounds like a great book
1. When they see each other its just instant love at first sight and they feel a connection.
2. The girl (MC) earlier in the story has something that tells her the future (or whatever) and she see him and her being happy and a couple. So wen she sees him later she recognizes him but the guy also kinda feels a connection.
OR.....
3. When he sees her he instantly feels a connection and the girl kinda feels it (not as much) but then hes nice to her (she has a difficult past) and wen he kisses her, she lets him, but note it wuldnt b spread out as much, as a getting to know each other and months latter fall in love (cuz love not main plot)
So out of the 3 which one did u like best? Or if u have a better idea or want to tweak one of mine, feel free to share.
*Please excuse my text talk*
Thank You!They're all good but I think the third one is the best. C:I like ge third one the best.
DefinItely #3
I like number two the best...
i like #3 it sounds like a great book
What does ayn rand mean in anthem,"they were not soft and rolled, they had hard shells of cloth and leather;"?
-Ayn Rand's Anthem 100 centennial edition Page 91 2nd paragraph 4th-5th line down or 3rd sentenceAnthem takes place in a dark ages medieval-type setting. It's not a futuristic dystopa filled with traditional rundown technical gadgetry. The "soft/rolled" thingies the narrator pictures are scrolls, and the things with "hard shells of cloth and leather" are hard-cover books. In Rand's envisioned future, litereature has taken a step back and writing is again done in papyrus scrolls rather than the comparatively more economical and practical modern-day book format.
Can I use Japanese folklore in an American setting?
-I've been toying around with werewolves, faeries, angels, witches, etc. and all I hear from people is "overused, overused, overused". Though I don't think that should stop me from writing, I do think that I could incorporate different mythical creatures into modern fantasy fiction. I like Japanese folklore like the kitsune, nekomata, yuki onna, etc. But can I write about them using a black protagonist set in America? Most people are used to European folklore so I'm wondering if this would work. Any ideas? If you suggest not using japanese folklore, then what mythical creatures should I use? And no flying monkeys, centaurs, mermaids, trolls or anything like that. I want them to look human.Japanese Folklore would be a good idea, since you're bringing something new to the table. I agree that angels, vampires, faeries etc are over used, so I think something other than that and Greek mythology (a craze which seems to be in full swing to my knowledge) would be refreshing and different.About your story.
Yes.
You could.
Absoloutely.
I read a story about Celtic folklore in America.
So it could work.
Mythical creatures?
Um...
Sorry.
Hold on.
nymphs.
naiids.
banshees.
vampires.
ghosts.
I was just checking...
google.
and I came on this site.
its creeeeeeeeeeepy..
check it out.
anyone.
it's scared me.
a
little.
good luck :)
Of course you can put Japanese folklore in an American setting! It doesn't matter what your setting is as long as you portray it well in the story. Different and original is the way to go!
You absolutely can do this. It sounds like a fun idea and one that people would enjoy reading. Go for it!
That sounds like a great idea. Go for it!
Yes.
You could.
Absoloutely.
I read a story about Celtic folklore in America.
So it could work.
Mythical creatures?
Um...
Sorry.
Hold on.
nymphs.
naiids.
banshees.
vampires.
ghosts.
I was just checking...
google.
and I came on this site.
its creeeeeeeeeeepy..
check it out.
anyone.
it's scared me.
a
little.
good luck :)
Of course you can put Japanese folklore in an American setting! It doesn't matter what your setting is as long as you portray it well in the story. Different and original is the way to go!
You absolutely can do this. It sounds like a fun idea and one that people would enjoy reading. Go for it!
That sounds like a great idea. Go for it!
Book: A Northern Light , question?
-I have to read a book called " A Northern Light" and i have to make a CD mix of the book the songs have to be based on the setting of the story, characters moods, etc. If you have anysongs to request please let me know and tell me why its a good song for the book!:) please help me cuz i need it for school now
Hades and Persephone teen books? Modern retakes if possible?
-I have already read Abandon by Meg Cabot, The Goddess Test by Aimee Carter, and Radiant Darkness by Emily Whitman.
The 9 lives of chloe king book, which book contains the most alek and Chloe moments?
-Any good chloe and alek moments? If so please write what book it was in! I just wanna get the book with chloe and alek. I'm not interested in Brian... At all
What are some good books for a teenage girl?
-so I've READ The Nanies Series(WHICH I LOVED) Twilight, The A-list Series, Harry Potter, all that stuff! But I absolutely adore the Nannies and the A-list, anything with a setting in hollywood or whatever, living the high life!! Please let me know ASAP!!! THNAK YOU!Have you tried...
Princess Diaries (fiction)
Vampire Academy Series (fantasy/vampires)
The Immortal Series (fantasy)
The Shiver Series (fantasy/werewolves)
The Strange Angel Series (fantasy/vampires & werewolves)
The Midnight Twin Series (fantasy)
The Cinderella Cleaners Series (fiction)
?
Most are fantasy! Hope you like them!
The percy jackson series and the lost hero and then the son of neptune, you have to read that order
cookery books
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Princess Diaries (fiction)
Vampire Academy Series (fantasy/vampires)
The Immortal Series (fantasy)
The Shiver Series (fantasy/werewolves)
The Strange Angel Series (fantasy/vampires & werewolves)
The Midnight Twin Series (fantasy)
The Cinderella Cleaners Series (fiction)
?
Most are fantasy! Hope you like them!
The percy jackson series and the lost hero and then the son of neptune, you have to read that order
cookery books
search online
A good conflict or a story?
-I just need a good conflict for a story that I'm writing, I want the main character to have like something special about him. His parents were killed but he doesn't know how, his uncles are trying to get rid of him by sending him to a school.. and I don't really know where to go from there...Maybe he can see into the past by just one touch and he finds out that his uncles killed his parents for their money ('cause his parents are rich?) When he touches them (before he boards his plane) he finds out but can't send the plane back. He finally goes back home and finds out his uncles ran away to an unknown place. So he tries to find them so he can get revenge...? He uses his power by touching people and seeing their past to see if they had seen his uncles.
I know it sounds pretty dumb, but I hope you choose it! :D
Write a story about Charley Follett
LIFE AT BOARDING SCHOOL AND ON THE LAST DAY OF SCHOOL HIS UNCLE ISNT THERE TO PICK HIM UP 0_o
I know it sounds pretty dumb, but I hope you choose it! :D
Write a story about Charley Follett
LIFE AT BOARDING SCHOOL AND ON THE LAST DAY OF SCHOOL HIS UNCLE ISNT THERE TO PICK HIM UP 0_o
2011年8月2日星期二
A good novel to use in a comparative essay alongside the novel 'the color purple' by Alice Walker.?
-as part of my a2 literature class, we have to produce a coursework piece in the form of a comparative essay. In this case the chosen novel is 'the color purple' by Alice Walker and the second novel is left to personal choice. The only idea i have sofar is the novel 'like water for chocolate' by Laura Esquivel & as many others in my class have chosen the same, i'd like to look for a more original option. Any ideas would be welcome.
Which is better as the main characters? 2 boys or 2 girls? would you care?
-Ok I know I keep asking questions like these! But I'm just doing some research to see which character dynamics people react the best to. Some people say 2 girls would be annoying but others say 2 boys would be boring.
So would you rather read a story (particularly a comic) about 2 girls or 2 boys? Does it matter to you?I would think that it could be exciting or boring no matter what you choose. The only thing that really matters is how developed the characters are; that's the main thing you should be worrying about.i personally like reading about boys more (in fact the book i'm reading right now is called "the things a brother knows" so obviously it's about guys :p) because i'm a girl and i don't want to read about girl problems because i live them! Also, most boys (or the ones i know at least) think that reading books with only girls in them (such as "the clique") makes them gay or something, like they'd get made fun of. however, the girls i know love reading about both, and girls won't get made fun of for reading books about dudes (like The Outsiders or something). i'm not saying every school or town works like that but it's how mine does. having said that, where i live, books about two boys would be more popular because both genders would read it. if it was about two girls, then it's only the girls who would read it.
but really, it's what you feel comfortable writing about. so good luck and happy writing :)
Well see the thing is I always write in female perspective because I am one. So.. I think one of each would appeal more but it doesn't really matter.. to me at least.
And since when are two girls boring? (best friends) in a story? I mean it wouldn't be lame just..it would be what girls would do.
But I recommend one of each JUST because then they could fall in love :)
I think that the only way to compromise would be a boy and a girl. I I know its obvious, but I would like that best and if that isnt and option then I'll say 2 girls. Hope this helepd :)
I'd rather read about 2 boys.
But, I think 1 boy and 1 girl would make the best combination.
I'm not sexist, by the way!
Well two girls, many people would turn away, thinking its going to be lame, 2 guys will appear better to an audience
I think 1 boy and 1 girl as friends and then at the end some romance blooms, kinda like Ron and hermione
how bout 1 girl, 1 boy?
Unless the material is directed towards a female audience, I would avoid two lead girls. It would be better to have a boy and a girl, as suggested above, or two boys.
Why?
Male audiences prefer male leads. Dunno why...maybe they're worried that the girl will start talking about her period or something. But that's how it works. Girls are less picky.
Two girls does sound annoying at first...and I'm a girl. Most of the books that I read are directed at the male-female audience, though, so I honestly can't say I've read a book or comic with two female leads. It's not something I'm interested in, but there's bound to be some sort of market for it. Unless there's nudity or the plot is wicked awesome, don't count on a large male fan-base.
If you want a mixed audience, best to do two guys or a guy and a girl. Guys are less likely to read a story if there is no male lead. Sometimes a girl is added, sometimes not. Many stories will have two males and one female; not only does this please both audiences, but it adds the chance of romance between characters (unless they're are related).
In summary, most stories use a combination of male/female leads. It is rare that you see just two boys or just two girls. Of all my early writing concepts (and I had many), there was only one single-female lead. Everything else included a male character. I don't think I'd ever write a story with two females leads. It's just not my taste.
So, yes, it does matter to me; it matters to many. But you shouldn't spend so much time asking people what they think. You write what works for you. At this stage in your life I doubt you're selling yourself out. Do what you want, enjoy the experience, and you'll be happy with yourself.
So would you rather read a story (particularly a comic) about 2 girls or 2 boys? Does it matter to you?I would think that it could be exciting or boring no matter what you choose. The only thing that really matters is how developed the characters are; that's the main thing you should be worrying about.i personally like reading about boys more (in fact the book i'm reading right now is called "the things a brother knows" so obviously it's about guys :p) because i'm a girl and i don't want to read about girl problems because i live them! Also, most boys (or the ones i know at least) think that reading books with only girls in them (such as "the clique") makes them gay or something, like they'd get made fun of. however, the girls i know love reading about both, and girls won't get made fun of for reading books about dudes (like The Outsiders or something). i'm not saying every school or town works like that but it's how mine does. having said that, where i live, books about two boys would be more popular because both genders would read it. if it was about two girls, then it's only the girls who would read it.
but really, it's what you feel comfortable writing about. so good luck and happy writing :)
Well see the thing is I always write in female perspective because I am one. So.. I think one of each would appeal more but it doesn't really matter.. to me at least.
And since when are two girls boring? (best friends) in a story? I mean it wouldn't be lame just..it would be what girls would do.
But I recommend one of each JUST because then they could fall in love :)
I think that the only way to compromise would be a boy and a girl. I I know its obvious, but I would like that best and if that isnt and option then I'll say 2 girls. Hope this helepd :)
I'd rather read about 2 boys.
But, I think 1 boy and 1 girl would make the best combination.
I'm not sexist, by the way!
Well two girls, many people would turn away, thinking its going to be lame, 2 guys will appear better to an audience
I think 1 boy and 1 girl as friends and then at the end some romance blooms, kinda like Ron and hermione
how bout 1 girl, 1 boy?
Unless the material is directed towards a female audience, I would avoid two lead girls. It would be better to have a boy and a girl, as suggested above, or two boys.
Why?
Male audiences prefer male leads. Dunno why...maybe they're worried that the girl will start talking about her period or something. But that's how it works. Girls are less picky.
Two girls does sound annoying at first...and I'm a girl. Most of the books that I read are directed at the male-female audience, though, so I honestly can't say I've read a book or comic with two female leads. It's not something I'm interested in, but there's bound to be some sort of market for it. Unless there's nudity or the plot is wicked awesome, don't count on a large male fan-base.
If you want a mixed audience, best to do two guys or a guy and a girl. Guys are less likely to read a story if there is no male lead. Sometimes a girl is added, sometimes not. Many stories will have two males and one female; not only does this please both audiences, but it adds the chance of romance between characters (unless they're are related).
In summary, most stories use a combination of male/female leads. It is rare that you see just two boys or just two girls. Of all my early writing concepts (and I had many), there was only one single-female lead. Everything else included a male character. I don't think I'd ever write a story with two females leads. It's just not my taste.
So, yes, it does matter to me; it matters to many. But you shouldn't spend so much time asking people what they think. You write what works for you. At this stage in your life I doubt you're selling yourself out. Do what you want, enjoy the experience, and you'll be happy with yourself.
"Snape!" ejaculated Slughorn who looked the most shaken, pale and sweating?
-LMAO! Well spotted! Slughorn is having a good time
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鈥淲and out, Potter.鈥?Harry moved into his usual position鈥?awesome
How old are you? 12? Grow up.
Get a dictionary! it means to blurt out!
'He [Harry] was on all fours again on Snape鈥檚 office floor. "Well, we鈥檒l soon find out, won鈥檛 we?鈥?said Snape smoothly.
鈥淲and out, Potter.鈥?Harry moved into his usual position鈥?awesome
How old are you? 12? Grow up.
Get a dictionary! it means to blurt out!
What was the son's name in the book "The Death of Ivan LLyich"?
-I'm doing summer work on it and I read it but I odn't have time to read it again to find the sons name!Vladimir Ivanich
Why do you like The Hunger Games?
-The Hunger Games is a book so please dont answer if you dont know what it is. I need detailed serious answers about why you like it.ok the reason i love hunger games is cuz right after i read the first line i was hooked. i know people say that all the time. but you got to agree with me there. some books start after 2 or 3 chapters but hunger games was awsome right from the 1st page. and i like the whole concept of games. i know its a bit harsh the last one standing lives but seriously thats the best bit. the way in which the author descibed the scene of the games man i wanted to be init. and then there are 2 guys n let me tell u 2 hot guys(even though we cant see them but i like to think they r cute).wat else do u need.
this book was so different from any other book i have read.EVER.!! i know that every reader wantes that. no one wants to read the same types of atory again n again but by different authors. its was a trilogy.
wat else do u want!!!!
this book was so different from any other book i have read.EVER.!! i know that every reader wantes that. no one wants to read the same types of atory again n again but by different authors. its was a trilogy.
wat else do u want!!!!
Writers: Do you prefer to write or type your books/stories?
-I prefer typing because the computer tells me when I make mistakes, it's neater, and there's basically no way to lose the writing, but of course there are some times when there isn't a computer nearby so I write any ideas in a notebook.I do both, but I start by hand-writing everything. I can type pretty fast so I feel like things are too rushed when I'm writing on the computer and I'm not putting enough thought into it. When I'm writing by hand, I'm forced to think about literally every word I put down, especially because I'm using pen. I agree with you that writing on the computer is neater -- a little bit of me dies every time I make a mistake on the paper. However, first drafts don't really need to be "neat" -- that's the whole point of them. Once I've got a chapter or so written in my notebook, I'll go get on the computer and type it out, editing as I go. That way, the typed story is already like my second draft.
If I come up with a part that I want to include later in the story but I haven't gotten to it yet, I'll go ahead and type it out and then save it somewhere where I can find it again when it's time.
Typing is definitely the better option for me. Every time I write a sentence or a paragraph I always end up striking off the entire thing and spit out something better. If I were writing I would be wasting a lot of pages and the earth's already having enough trouble yes? Besides, seeing lots of slashes and cuts totally turns off my writing mood. If its on my word processor, it'll always appear clean and if I feel what I wrote earlier was good enough I won't have to type it out all over again (just a simple Ctrl+Z does the trick!) Like you said, the computer points out my mistakes and if ever I have a lack of words or don't know the meaning of something our the use of a certain word in different contexts the internet helps me find the answer in a way which is less annoying than heaving my dictionary out of my cupboard and going through the 1000+ pages.
Typing no doubt.
1) I'm a computer nerd . . . so I spend a lot of my free time on it anyway
2) It's a lot more organised and it's harder to lose computer files
3) It's more private on a computer
4) I'd have to spend too much time making sure I can read my (terrible) handwriting if I did it by hand
5) I think faster than I write (by hand). I wouldn't be able to get all my ideas out fast enough on paper
I prefer writing in a notebook desicated only to the current story I'm working on. After I'm finished with the story I pass it on to the computer, that way if anything happens to my computer I still have my story.
I type them as I'm continuously going back to alter things or to do corrections as I work. I used to write in notebooks when I was travelling but I've now bought myself a little netbook so I can type while I travel too.
Computer is more efficient but writing by hand makes you feel the characters!
Same:) Plus, if you write it you just have to type it anyways. (P.S. I love the nyan cat avatar)
My fingers can keep up with my head, so I prefer typing. If I write in with a pen I never get my ideas out fast enough.
Typing its a lot easier and it can give u more time to think than to write
type. I cant write a story because ill get lazy and never finish
If I come up with a part that I want to include later in the story but I haven't gotten to it yet, I'll go ahead and type it out and then save it somewhere where I can find it again when it's time.
Typing is definitely the better option for me. Every time I write a sentence or a paragraph I always end up striking off the entire thing and spit out something better. If I were writing I would be wasting a lot of pages and the earth's already having enough trouble yes? Besides, seeing lots of slashes and cuts totally turns off my writing mood. If its on my word processor, it'll always appear clean and if I feel what I wrote earlier was good enough I won't have to type it out all over again (just a simple Ctrl+Z does the trick!) Like you said, the computer points out my mistakes and if ever I have a lack of words or don't know the meaning of something our the use of a certain word in different contexts the internet helps me find the answer in a way which is less annoying than heaving my dictionary out of my cupboard and going through the 1000+ pages.
Typing no doubt.
1) I'm a computer nerd . . . so I spend a lot of my free time on it anyway
2) It's a lot more organised and it's harder to lose computer files
3) It's more private on a computer
4) I'd have to spend too much time making sure I can read my (terrible) handwriting if I did it by hand
5) I think faster than I write (by hand). I wouldn't be able to get all my ideas out fast enough on paper
I prefer writing in a notebook desicated only to the current story I'm working on. After I'm finished with the story I pass it on to the computer, that way if anything happens to my computer I still have my story.
I type them as I'm continuously going back to alter things or to do corrections as I work. I used to write in notebooks when I was travelling but I've now bought myself a little netbook so I can type while I travel too.
Computer is more efficient but writing by hand makes you feel the characters!
Same:) Plus, if you write it you just have to type it anyways. (P.S. I love the nyan cat avatar)
My fingers can keep up with my head, so I prefer typing. If I write in with a pen I never get my ideas out fast enough.
Typing its a lot easier and it can give u more time to think than to write
type. I cant write a story because ill get lazy and never finish
Which is better as the main characters? 2 boys or 2 girls? would you care?
-I'm asking one more time because I forgot to mention that I dont want "1 boy 1 girl" to be an option. It COULD. I'm thinking about it! but they wouldnt fall in love. The story is meant to be funny, not romantic!
So if you could choose between 2 boys, 2 girls, (or 1 boy 1 girl if you seriously want but they would just be friends) then which would you choose?
Remember: this is a comedy.
P.S: If it was a story about 2 girls then it WOULDNT be girly! Trust me, I dont like girly things either. They wouldnt talk about boys and periods and makeup and stuff because its a story for everyone of all genders.I would like either. It's really not about what gender the character is, it is more about how "rich" the character is.I don't mean like money rich but how complex and interesting the character is that is what I would call a rich character. Really you could have an amazing and amusing plot but if you have dry characters it would just fall flat.
I guess i would probably prefer 1 girl and 1 guy just because it makes it more interesting.
Hope your story turns out great! :) hope I helped!I feel like I missed out on half the conversation, but I'll try to answer.
I think it all depends on the type of humor. I mean, usually guy humor and girl humor is completely different. So is geek humor and, well, any kind of humor.
Girls tend to be more... snarky. That can be funny, especially if it's clever. Girls also like random humor.
Boys? They're kinda stupid humor. "Your mom" kind of humor. Quick quips and physical antics.
I guess if I had to pick... it would be two guys.
But all kinds of humor, if well timed, is funny.
Then if YOU don't want the story line to be as you say "girly" than just use guys. They can do many stupid things which are hilarious just as girls can.
So if you could choose between 2 boys, 2 girls, (or 1 boy 1 girl if you seriously want but they would just be friends) then which would you choose?
Remember: this is a comedy.
P.S: If it was a story about 2 girls then it WOULDNT be girly! Trust me, I dont like girly things either. They wouldnt talk about boys and periods and makeup and stuff because its a story for everyone of all genders.I would like either. It's really not about what gender the character is, it is more about how "rich" the character is.I don't mean like money rich but how complex and interesting the character is that is what I would call a rich character. Really you could have an amazing and amusing plot but if you have dry characters it would just fall flat.
I guess i would probably prefer 1 girl and 1 guy just because it makes it more interesting.
Hope your story turns out great! :) hope I helped!I feel like I missed out on half the conversation, but I'll try to answer.
I think it all depends on the type of humor. I mean, usually guy humor and girl humor is completely different. So is geek humor and, well, any kind of humor.
Girls tend to be more... snarky. That can be funny, especially if it's clever. Girls also like random humor.
Boys? They're kinda stupid humor. "Your mom" kind of humor. Quick quips and physical antics.
I guess if I had to pick... it would be two guys.
But all kinds of humor, if well timed, is funny.
Then if YOU don't want the story line to be as you say "girly" than just use guys. They can do many stupid things which are hilarious just as girls can.
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