Would you read this book?

-ok so i'm writing a book about a pioneer girl that is 13 and she was alive in the 1800 her mom died when giving birth to her little sister kristy and her dad ran away in the middle of the night and was never found or heard of again so they live with their crazy aunt maggie but when her town was attacted and her aunt and all her friends where killed her and her little sister wandered off into the world hoping to find the res of her family her dad always told her about.What do yo think?A little complicated.



Interesting.



Original.



Maybe a little depressing.



Sounds kinda sad.



But over all...



I like it.



If your going to write it you should...



it has



potential



description



creativity



originality



and



maybe even a moral.



Try it, I'd read it. :)
Ok first, you write a story because YOU want to, not anyone else. Sure, they're gonna read it, but in the end, it's your story.

And Second, :) It sounds good.
I would include citations from history. It's really good, although the ending could use some work. What happens to the main heroine?
Nope.

I don't read books with bad grammar.