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2011年8月4日星期四

Which love connection is better?

-My story is fantasy but its not fantasy romance. Romance is just a subplot. So in my story i want there to b some type of love at first sight between my MC and a boy, i had a few ideas of how exactly it wuld go, so which one do u like better?



1. When they see each other its just instant love at first sight and they feel a connection.



2. The girl (MC) earlier in the story has something that tells her the future (or whatever) and she see him and her being happy and a couple. So wen she sees him later she recognizes him but the guy also kinda feels a connection.



OR.....



3. When he sees her he instantly feels a connection and the girl kinda feels it (not as much) but then hes nice to her (she has a difficult past) and wen he kisses her, she lets him, but note it wuldnt b spread out as much, as a getting to know each other and months latter fall in love (cuz love not main plot)



So out of the 3 which one did u like best? Or if u have a better idea or want to tweak one of mine, feel free to share.

*Please excuse my text talk*

Thank You!They're all good but I think the third one is the best. C:I like ge third one the best.
DefinItely #3
I like number two the best...
i like #3 it sounds like a great book

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