-Please be detailed and include anything you wanna add. I want to know exactly, describe the way you picture the person who wrote it the way you'd describe a character you know EVERYTHING about. Most detailed gets ten points!
"Before they ruined us, we were taught. Who to trust, how to defend, the purpose of all those tests. Only the best of the best of the human race could survive. We're...not sure why, but they're still running those programs up there. Our escape routes are so none of us get caught, because we refuse to be annihilated by them, just as we feel the same about working for them. Don't get lost. Levey, oh no, you'll end up killing somebody if you let them have this power over you. Do you really want to wake up with my neck dangling out of the window, detached and lifeless, the hatched in your hand? Does that sound good to you? Are you okay, fine, just dandy with that statement permanently printed on you, a personal life sentence on your shoulders? Never trust your mind, only your emotions. Remember? We're safe now, but who can know if you were assaulted and beat up in the head before set back on your feet? I mean, would they really let me hang out here if I am whatever you now think I am? Would they really let a monster roam the halls-let's be serious. There's no way I'm the reason for security, Lev. I know you know that."
Different levels of horror escaladed, scattered across, then slowly peeled of off Levey's face, but he kept nodding nonetheless.I ddin't really understand the paragraph but I'll give you my description.
Girl.
13-15 years old.
Medium length black or dark brown hair.
No streaks.
Hazel or light brown eyes.
Height ranging rom five to five four feet.
Pale skin.
Some freckles.
Pointed nose.
Small chin.
Long eyelashes.
Thin eyebrows.
Wears black and white tee.
Either comfy sweat pants or slightly loose faded jeans, black or blue.
Ripped up Chuck Taylors.
No hair accessories.
No glasses.
Likes writing mysteries, enjoys scary/horror stuff, and once in a while needs her alone time.
Hates optimism, girliness, and sappy romances.
Is original.
Doesn't care for what others say.
Has friends, like her.
But without her friends, she's a lone wolf.
Likes to laugh, read, sketch, and chill.
Her life is the computer and electronics.
Family time? No.
Mani Pedis? No.
Haunted House? Yes.
Horror Marathon? Yes.
Hates to be labelled.
Stands out.
Sometimes the wierd girl...
But does she care?
Nope.
Hope that worked. :PI imagine some kind of self-obsessed person who cares way too much what others think. The person spends so much time preening themselves that they clearly don't listen during English lessons.
Nothing about this tells us anything about whether you're a human, a robot, or a sixty-armed spider from the planet Xyzia.
This doesn't make a lot of sense. It's nice of you to share, but maybe too much to ask for others to critique it.
Not this again!
I think the person speaking this is very... loopy? Crazy? He/she (I think it's a he) takes being tortured or pain very calmly. He's probably masochistic or was put through a harsh childhood (beatings, etc.) . He's probably a very young adult and has learned and experienced many painful things during his short life. He probably lost a close friend from drugs, suicide, or getting into the wrong crowd. He could have even killed a person before. Levey is probably a disturbed child who has killed many people (maybe in his family?) and feels no guilt. He (is Levey a girl or boy name?) has known the speaker for maybe a few months and was maybe reprehended by him for stealing and caught murdering someone in front of the speaker. Levey is in a room w/ the speaker, probably deciding to kill the speaker by tossing him out a window or cutting his head off.
This monologue was very well written and it took quite some time to characterize this speaker! Great job!
Hope you liked my guessing! Sorry if I used the word "probably" too much. I hope what I guessed was right!
I imagine the author as being a pretentious 13 year old who is very full of herself and thinks she is terribly grown-up. In ten years' time, I think she will look back on this question and cringe with embarrassment.
Here's some advice for you: if you ask people a question, they will give you an honest answer. If you only want to get nice answers, don't ask the question at all. Nobody has been mean to you. They have been honest. I don't get a good impression of the author of this piece of writing, so that's what I've explained in my answer. Why would I lie? Don't beg people for their opinions and throw your toys out of the pram when they give them.
If you just want people to tell you how great you are, go and hang out with your friends instead of expecting total strangers to fawn over you. Why would people act as cheerleaders for you?
A hyperactive thirteen year old who is bored with summer vacation and nothing to do, so they proceed to spam yahoo answers with a bunch of stupid, pointless questions. They also have glasses covering their brown eyes, pimpled face. And they're short. Girl, hair up in a ponytail/bun.
Edit: We're not "foolishly attempt at meanness" or anything. We're being honest. It's what we think. You asked for it, you get it. If you don't want honestly, then don't ask for it. Just because you think it's "mean" doesn't mean it is. Truth hurts. Can't handle that, can't handle anything.
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