Tell me what you think?

-Just a little story I threw together awhile back. I don't care what the feedback is, as long as it's feedback. Thank you.



http://teenink.com/fiction/realistic_fic鈥?/a>I couldn't read it all sorry :/ It just didn't capture my attention. Sorry again...



It's not that it's bad. But it's not interesting either.



;)I love it. you really drew me into the story. I think you should do something more with your writing. Would you review mine

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