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2011年8月2日星期二

Which love connection is better?

-Srry for the re post but is was kinda a tie between 2 and 3, and i didnt explain 3 enough, so i just need a few more answers to even it out. So in my story (its fantasy, but not fantasy romance) i want there to some kind of instant love connection between the MC and a boy. So which way for it too happen is better? 1 or 2?



1. The girl (MC) earlier in the story has something that tells her the future (or whatever) and she see him and her being happy and a couple. So wen she sees him later she recognizes him and likes him, and the guy also kinda feels a connection.

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2. When he sees her he instantly feels a connection and the girl kinda feels it (not as much) but then hes nice to her and makes her feel safe (she has a difficult past) and they get to like each other, but please note it WOULD NOT b spread out as much. It would NOT be them falling in love after months, but after a few weeks (cuz love not main plot).



So which did u like better? Or do u have a better suggestion? Or shuld i tweak one of the two?

*Please excuse my text talk*

Thank You!well, two because for one she only saw herself with him which doesnt mean that she NEEDS to be with him... anyway I understand myself and reccomend twoI definitely prefer two!
two, one is a bit contrived.

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