-Albus Potter Wasn't Normal , Even To Muggles . He Was Smart , Brave , Friendly And Creative . He Had Thick Black Hair That Flopped Over His Forehead And Bright Green Eyes That Sparkled . Everyone Thought He Looked Just Like His Father Harry .
He Was In 5th Year Of Hogwarts School Of Witch Craft And Wizardry And He Loved It . His Brother James Was In His 6th And Last Year And Their Sister Lily Was In Her 3rd Year .They Were All Quite Popular .
It Was The 25th Of December And All Of The Children Were Home For Christmas. Ron And Hermione Had Come Over For Christmas Dinner With Their Children Rose And Hugo .
" Anything Exciting Happen Lately In School ?" Asked Harry At Christmas Dinner .
"Gryfindor Is Winning So Far In Quidicth " Said James Who Was The Keeper For Gryfindor .
"Anything Else ?" Questioned Their Mother , Ginnny .
"Nothing Else " Murmered Albus .
There Was A Silence For A Few Seconds As They Ate When Lily Suddenly Burst Out .
"Albus Has A Girlfriend ! And She's A Slytherin "
Albus Glared At Lily . "It Was Supposed To Be A Secret " He Said Menacingly .
"A Slytherin " Said Ron With His Eyebrows Raised .
"Oh Shut Up " Said Albus As He Walked Out Of The Room
"Whats This Girlfriend Of Yours Like Then ? " Asked Harry Later That Night.
"Nice " Replied Albus . "Her Names Leah "
The Rest Of The Hoilidays Was Peaceful And Being With Family Was A Nice Break From Hogwarts . But They Were All Eagar To Get Back . They All Went Back To Hogwarts On The 1st Of January .
Thanks For Reading It , Its Not That Good Its My First Time Writing A Fan Fiction Honest Opinions Please :)
Violet xBe more descriptive and don't capitalize every word. It's not that great.Meh...not that great (mostly because nothing happened)...and it was annoying that you felt the need to give every word a capital letter...|||I agree. That capital letter thing is really annoying. I'd read it if Leah was the daughter of a well known death eater
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